for The Boy Bride10/14/2019 c13 
1PsychosomaticReality
Ueshiro is a twisted fucker and I want Takeo and Ryan to put him in his place, the grave with his name on it.
That poor servant boy..
I kinda want Ryan to deliver the killing blow and become super famous and important. Make his family proud and his heart happy.
1PsychosomaticRealityUeshiro is a twisted fucker and I want Takeo and Ryan to put him in his place, the grave with his name on it.
That poor servant boy..
I kinda want Ryan to deliver the killing blow and become super famous and important. Make his family proud and his heart happy.
10/14/2019 c12 PsychosomaticReality
I loved this Sayako chic being put in her place. What a trigger happy fan, ya know. But its all chill except.. she doesn't know who she's talking to! XD
I loved this Sayako chic being put in her place. What a trigger happy fan, ya know. But its all chill except.. she doesn't know who she's talking to! XD
10/14/2019 c11 PsychosomaticReality
Oh no, I just knew something would try to ruin that perfect happiness. Damn Ueshiro..
Oh no, I just knew something would try to ruin that perfect happiness. Damn Ueshiro..
10/14/2019 c9 PsychosomaticReality
Again, Im screaming. This is so cute I don't know what to do. Im lost in just how perfect Takeo is and how Ryan is totally going to be happy with him.
Again, Im screaming. This is so cute I don't know what to do. Im lost in just how perfect Takeo is and how Ryan is totally going to be happy with him.
10/14/2019 c4 PsychosomaticReality
The sound of me, screaming and turning equally as red as Ryan right now.
Yes, that's all I have to say so far. Excuse me while I throw myself into the rest of this..
The sound of me, screaming and turning equally as red as Ryan right now.
Yes, that's all I have to say so far. Excuse me while I throw myself into the rest of this..
5/19/2015 c13 sarehgol3
how stupid.
U bring that boy to Jepan because of war and for safety , then here is another war between clans?
Im not surprised this story is abandoned.
how stupid.
U bring that boy to Jepan because of war and for safety , then here is another war between clans?
Im not surprised this story is abandoned.
6/19/2014 c13 3morningstorm70
I know it's been awhile but I hope you continue this story it has grabbed me and now I'm stuck because there is no more
it's a good story and was just warming up to the really good stuff I believe
3morningstorm70I know it's been awhile but I hope you continue this story it has grabbed me and now I'm stuck because there is no more
it's a good story and was just warming up to the really good stuff I believe
5/3/2014 c4 harry
this story is stuffed up each chapter do not flow in to the next one it's hard to make heads or tales and to flow the story line needs to have gaps filled in
this story is stuffed up each chapter do not flow in to the next one it's hard to make heads or tales and to flow the story line needs to have gaps filled in
7/25/2013 c12 Guest
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4/24/2013 c13 11Redbone Haz
I really hope you will finish this story! It so wonderful and well written that I just couldn't put it down!:) please update soon or when you have time!:):)
11Redbone HazI really hope you will finish this story! It so wonderful and well written that I just couldn't put it down!:) please update soon or when you have time!:):)
1/2/2013 c13 6TheWitch'sLover
This story is beautifully written and very fluid and easy to read. I'd love for you to update, although that seems unlikely :P Great story! :) x
6TheWitch'sLoverThis story is beautifully written and very fluid and easy to read. I'd love for you to update, although that seems unlikely :P Great story! :) x
1/2/2013 c6 TheWitch'sLover
[My eyes trailed upward, resting on the sharp curve of his jaw, a generous mouth, high cheeks, and his eyes… were looking straight into my own.]
Haha, love it ;)
[My eyes trailed upward, resting on the sharp curve of his jaw, a generous mouth, high cheeks, and his eyes… were looking straight into my own.]
Haha, love it ;)
9/26/2012 c5 Guest
I can think of a few more questions that should have been asked. I think I would have wanted to meet the parents.
I can think of a few more questions that should have been asked. I think I would have wanted to meet the parents.
9/10/2012 c13 2ripples-of-hope
Just discovered this story and really love it. Hope you decide to update it :)
2ripples-of-hopeJust discovered this story and really love it. Hope you decide to update it :)