for The Boy Bride3/18/2007 c11 megerdum
:D
:D
3/18/2007 c11 
26chinotto
oh noo! oh no a villain..make him die :(
*thinks fluff and happiness* *thinks fluff and happiness* :P
26chinottooh noo! oh no a villain..make him die :(
*thinks fluff and happiness* *thinks fluff and happiness* :P
3/15/2007 c1 toads
Jack i am begging you to write more chapters please!
Jack i am begging you to write more chapters please!
2/28/2007 c10 3D. Empress
Oh yes, I definitely enjoyed this chapter! I love how Ryan's perspective is very much that of a foreigner in a strange land, but not contemptuous or frightened and you descriptions of this AU? Japan is lovely and oh-so-rich in details, it's like a manga expressed entirely in text. The sprinkle of Japanese you insert in here is yards above the typical "arigato" and "konnichiwa" of poor fanfiction, and it's nice to know you've done research... Unless you've a Japanese heritage that is... :D
Really, are you still working on this? It has been almost exactly one year already.
3D. EmpressOh yes, I definitely enjoyed this chapter! I love how Ryan's perspective is very much that of a foreigner in a strange land, but not contemptuous or frightened and you descriptions of this AU? Japan is lovely and oh-so-rich in details, it's like a manga expressed entirely in text. The sprinkle of Japanese you insert in here is yards above the typical "arigato" and "konnichiwa" of poor fanfiction, and it's nice to know you've done research... Unless you've a Japanese heritage that is... :D
Really, are you still working on this? It has been almost exactly one year already.
2/9/2007 c10 toads
i love this story , you must finish it please!
i love this story , you must finish it please!
2/6/2007 c10 2Fork-In-Your-Eye
Sugoi na anta wa! Honto ni omoshiroi shousetsu! =P! Zannendesu naa, Atashi no pasokon nihon go wa kakitte nai. Maa, anta wa nihon jin desu ka? heheXD...
K... Love the story! Arranged marriages from the US! First i've heard off. Weird but interesting... Weird, I have some doubts bout Takeo, why he agreed so easily with everything? And is it really possible that Takeo to like Ryan, i mean, its like the marriage is arranged and he just accepts it? Maybe its just me, i think too much heheXP...
Sa.. Update soon! ^^ DOMO~
2Fork-In-Your-EyeSugoi na anta wa! Honto ni omoshiroi shousetsu! =P! Zannendesu naa, Atashi no pasokon nihon go wa kakitte nai. Maa, anta wa nihon jin desu ka? heheXD...
K... Love the story! Arranged marriages from the US! First i've heard off. Weird but interesting... Weird, I have some doubts bout Takeo, why he agreed so easily with everything? And is it really possible that Takeo to like Ryan, i mean, its like the marriage is arranged and he just accepts it? Maybe its just me, i think too much heheXP...
Sa.. Update soon! ^^ DOMO~
2/5/2007 c10 37Elidhu
Usually I don't usually read M/M but thhis time the summary just caught me and i think it's really good so far.
Have you ever read the Tales of The Otori, Across The Nightingale Floor, Grass For His Pillow, Brilliance of the Moon and The Harsh Cry Of The Heron if not I think you would really enjoy them. The main character is called Takeo.
37ElidhuUsually I don't usually read M/M but thhis time the summary just caught me and i think it's really good so far.
Have you ever read the Tales of The Otori, Across The Nightingale Floor, Grass For His Pillow, Brilliance of the Moon and The Harsh Cry Of The Heron if not I think you would really enjoy them. The main character is called Takeo.
1/1/2007 c10 Ao
I read this all in one day. :B I really like it (though I wish I would have known those translations were at the end, because it took me forever to find the translations-only to give up finally and continue reading. XD) It seems its been awhile since your last update. I hope that doesn't mean you have given up on it!
I read this all in one day. :B I really like it (though I wish I would have known those translations were at the end, because it took me forever to find the translations-only to give up finally and continue reading. XD) It seems its been awhile since your last update. I hope that doesn't mean you have given up on it!
12/8/2006 c10 10komodo dragon
UPDATE SON PLEASSE! It is a beautiful story, I didn't think you would use a war to get them together, I expected that he would have been "bougt like they did, and still do if I am not mistaken. It is a nice plot and very well written. I can't wait for you to update, PLEASE!
10komodo dragonUPDATE SON PLEASSE! It is a beautiful story, I didn't think you would use a war to get them together, I expected that he would have been "bougt like they did, and still do if I am not mistaken. It is a nice plot and very well written. I can't wait for you to update, PLEASE!
12/8/2006 c9 komodo dragon
That was FUNNY! I fell off my chair when I read this chapter, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
That was FUNNY! I fell off my chair when I read this chapter, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
12/8/2006 c3 komodo dragon
It would be so funny, if not disturbing, if the man gave him a sign that had Japenese curse words on there.
It would be so funny, if not disturbing, if the man gave him a sign that had Japenese curse words on there.