for The Boy Bride2/20/2005 c9 hisame
update update update! or i'll hire a hitman to get you! not that i hav any idea who the hell you are, not that that matters o.O ryan iz so cute ^-^
update update update! or i'll hire a hitman to get you! not that i hav any idea who the hell you are, not that that matters o.O ryan iz so cute ^-^
2/12/2005 c9 Jaded Breeze
Update now! Do it! PLEASE! You havent updated since July and thats sad! Update NOW s'il vous plait!
Update now! Do it! PLEASE! You havent updated since July and thats sad! Update NOW s'il vous plait!
1/17/2005 c9 
11Noellen
Aw, too cute of a story to not be updated soon. I like it, a lot. It's original. I was tired when I started reading it-but after the first chapter I was hooked! It's sweet, fluffy-happy, that sort of thing. You do a good job 'n such with the characters. I love Ryan and Takeo. nn;;
11NoellenAw, too cute of a story to not be updated soon. I like it, a lot. It's original. I was tired when I started reading it-but after the first chapter I was hooked! It's sweet, fluffy-happy, that sort of thing. You do a good job 'n such with the characters. I love Ryan and Takeo. nn;;
1/8/2005 c9 Jadwiga
Hiya! This story is great - really funny. Please update it! It is very good and I would very much like to read more about Ryan, Takeo and Shyia.
Hiya! This story is great - really funny. Please update it! It is very good and I would very much like to read more about Ryan, Takeo and Shyia.
12/28/2004 c9 4Kakiryu
o.O ...I love this! *has a heart attack* It's wonderful!
Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.
4Kakiryuo.O ...I love this! *has a heart attack* It's wonderful!
Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.
12/25/2004 c1 1RoQ
I actually kinda like the style this is in. It works. =O
And now I'm off to read chapter 1!
1RoQI actually kinda like the style this is in. It works. =O
And now I'm off to read chapter 1!
12/7/2004 c9 SatisfyAnEmptyInside
Well, its only been like 5 months. I really like Takeo. He's cute. So is Ryan. Chapter 8 (9, whatever) was extremely adorable. I love it! Add soon, would you? Can't wait!
Well, its only been like 5 months. I really like Takeo. He's cute. So is Ryan. Chapter 8 (9, whatever) was extremely adorable. I love it! Add soon, would you? Can't wait!
11/23/2004 c9 2yuri sasou
Uh is it time for another update?I really want to know what happens next.*whines*
2yuri sasouUh is it time for another update?I really want to know what happens next.*whines*
10/6/2004 c9 50Alequinn
Nippon's hidden secret. lol It's just so cool how accepting they were in those times, strictly speaking, of course. =D; Ahh~ I've read your story thus far (chap 9!), and just wanna say you are SO amazing. No joke, I love this story so much! So original and different and Ryan and Takeo's relationship is just so ridiculously cute and lovely, I'm just so happy they are being matched together! I think I wuv you for being able to write this good. lol Write more soon - n Takeo is such a dream husband. XD Ganbatte!
50AlequinnNippon's hidden secret. lol It's just so cool how accepting they were in those times, strictly speaking, of course. =D; Ahh~ I've read your story thus far (chap 9!), and just wanna say you are SO amazing. No joke, I love this story so much! So original and different and Ryan and Takeo's relationship is just so ridiculously cute and lovely, I'm just so happy they are being matched together! I think I wuv you for being able to write this good. lol Write more soon - n Takeo is such a dream husband. XD Ganbatte!
8/8/2004 c9 96Liebe Sasa
I really like this story, though there were a few things that seemed a bit off. For example, I don't think a servant would refer to Ryan as "-kun", however close they may be. Also, I'm not sure how active the Feudal system really is in Japan anymore, though I suppose if this is an alternate reality type Earth, it doesn't really matter.
I like your writing style, and the plot of this story. A few typos squeek through, but over all it is very good. I look forward to an update.
~Sasa
96Liebe SasaI really like this story, though there were a few things that seemed a bit off. For example, I don't think a servant would refer to Ryan as "-kun", however close they may be. Also, I'm not sure how active the Feudal system really is in Japan anymore, though I suppose if this is an alternate reality type Earth, it doesn't really matter.
I like your writing style, and the plot of this story. A few typos squeek through, but over all it is very good. I look forward to an update.
~Sasa
8/4/2004 c9 Jess
OH My GOODNESS I Love this story please update really soon ok!
OH My GOODNESS I Love this story please update really soon ok!