for The Boy Bride7/6/2004 c9 
10afk
really nice stroy! why did you jump the lemon? hahaha ^^;
anyway i like the idea of america being destroyed, and you're right it will come ^~
but you have to update son! *shows shinny knife*
10afkreally nice stroy! why did you jump the lemon? hahaha ^^;
anyway i like the idea of america being destroyed, and you're right it will come ^~
but you have to update son! *shows shinny knife*
6/21/2004 c9 Seph
hey! this is such a nice story i was wondering why you didn't bother to continue it? is something the matter writters block maybe? or you just wrote it somewhere else please *puppy dog eyes* i need to know!
hey! this is such a nice story i was wondering why you didn't bother to continue it? is something the matter writters block maybe? or you just wrote it somewhere else please *puppy dog eyes* i need to know!
5/2/2004 c9 3Rivana
Oh, come on. A whole chap just talking jibberish. Think of us poor yaoi fans dieing to see what happens with this boy bride and his 'oh so cute I just wanna cuddle him' husband... *sulks*
Ah well, I guess you have your rights, but why haven't you kept this one going? It's so different and nice...
3RivanaOh, come on. A whole chap just talking jibberish. Think of us poor yaoi fans dieing to see what happens with this boy bride and his 'oh so cute I just wanna cuddle him' husband... *sulks*
Ah well, I guess you have your rights, but why haven't you kept this one going? It's so different and nice...
3/8/2004 c9 7AethraZip
Very sweet and amusing and.. and just good. Please update it soon and, uh, yeah..
~Zip
7AethraZipVery sweet and amusing and.. and just good. Please update it soon and, uh, yeah..
~Zip
12/9/2003 c9 UsagiNoSenshi
Finish my darn story... and why is Dani scared that I'm a 'sraight up yaoi girl'? ::tilts head:: I'm a good girl i swear... so finish the story!I want more pretty men!
Finish my darn story... and why is Dani scared that I'm a 'sraight up yaoi girl'? ::tilts head:: I'm a good girl i swear... so finish the story!I want more pretty men!
11/23/2003 c8 39Naatz
My God, that's such a sweet story! *_*
It's nice to read a good shounen-ai story, at last. Normal grammar, normal people, normal POV, and not some stiffling crap that's so common out there. I can't believe I spend my evenings looking for a good read.
Well, I found today's. ^_^ I like the way Ryan expresses his thoughts, and even when they're dramatic and sad, it doesn't make me want to throw this story to all hells. I like this thingie. ^_^
PLEASE continue.
|Meduza|
39NaatzMy God, that's such a sweet story! *_*
It's nice to read a good shounen-ai story, at last. Normal grammar, normal people, normal POV, and not some stiffling crap that's so common out there. I can't believe I spend my evenings looking for a good read.
Well, I found today's. ^_^ I like the way Ryan expresses his thoughts, and even when they're dramatic and sad, it doesn't make me want to throw this story to all hells. I like this thingie. ^_^
PLEASE continue.
|Meduza|
10/26/2003 c8 newtypeshadow
this is a great idea for a story - a war on -american- soil (how long has it been? :knocks on wood:) and mail order...spouses... i thought the summary was terrific.
needless to say i'm enjoying the story more than the summary. is it voyeuristic to enjoy looking at all these strange happenings through ryan's eyes? takeo seemed very intimidating, and now his sense of honor is killing me. he and ryan are still going to talk, right? get to know each other? (fall in love? :is hopeful:) his last sentence (ch7) was like a bucket of cold water down my back. that scene made me sad. i do hope shiya will help him out. he's cool.
the near-rape was nicely done. i like how it was described more as sounds and feelings than sight - that appealed to me. if i wasn't so biased toward takeo (who's not dead), i might be sad that someone as cool as justin seems to be is out of the picture. he and ryan are cute.
but not as cute as takeo and ryan will be when you write more. (that was a hint.) so update soon, please!
this is a great idea for a story - a war on -american- soil (how long has it been? :knocks on wood:) and mail order...spouses... i thought the summary was terrific.
needless to say i'm enjoying the story more than the summary. is it voyeuristic to enjoy looking at all these strange happenings through ryan's eyes? takeo seemed very intimidating, and now his sense of honor is killing me. he and ryan are still going to talk, right? get to know each other? (fall in love? :is hopeful:) his last sentence (ch7) was like a bucket of cold water down my back. that scene made me sad. i do hope shiya will help him out. he's cool.
the near-rape was nicely done. i like how it was described more as sounds and feelings than sight - that appealed to me. if i wasn't so biased toward takeo (who's not dead), i might be sad that someone as cool as justin seems to be is out of the picture. he and ryan are cute.
but not as cute as takeo and ryan will be when you write more. (that was a hint.) so update soon, please!
10/12/2003 c9 EagleGirl
I really like your story! You have to update soon!
I really like your story! You have to update soon!
10/10/2003 c8 28Anti Rainbows
::Is currently shaking:: Wow... I... love this story, and I feel bad because I like Justin (Which is odd typing that since its my elders brother name ^^;) character and I hate that I like it since he doesn't really live (But I also love Takeo character and his attitude.)
and I... just love your story ^_^ ::had to add it her favs.::
28Anti Rainbows::Is currently shaking:: Wow... I... love this story, and I feel bad because I like Justin (Which is odd typing that since its my elders brother name ^^;) character and I hate that I like it since he doesn't really live (But I also love Takeo character and his attitude.)
and I... just love your story ^_^ ::had to add it her favs.::