for The Boy Bride5/17/2012 c1 Boo
juz wanna say, what a pity, it won’t ever finished
juz wanna say, what a pity, it won’t ever finished
3/17/2012 c13 
1Wings of Beauty
LOVE! Please update the next chapter! It has been a few years already!
1Wings of BeautyLOVE! Please update the next chapter! It has been a few years already!
11/17/2011 c11 NightMoon66
This story is so good I read it straight through. I just paused to appreciate Takeo and Ryan's good humor when they laughed at Shiya. Poor Shiya, though.
I noticed that the Japanese Takahashi clan call him "Rian" and pronounce it that way. It would be interesting if he had to meet back up with his family after everything's changed so much.
This story is so good I read it straight through. I just paused to appreciate Takeo and Ryan's good humor when they laughed at Shiya. Poor Shiya, though.
I noticed that the Japanese Takahashi clan call him "Rian" and pronounce it that way. It would be interesting if he had to meet back up with his family after everything's changed so much.
10/9/2011 c13 6magnanimousSquirrel
Oh god, Ueshiro is crazy!
And your chapter titles are very misleading if you're looking at them to see what will happen throughout the story..
6magnanimousSquirrelOh god, Ueshiro is crazy!
And your chapter titles are very misleading if you're looking at them to see what will happen throughout the story..
9/15/2011 c13 bigfan
oh this is getting so very exciting, can't wait to see what Ueshiro has planned to hurt Takeo by hurting his beloved Ryan. aaaaaaaaa...pls. update soon!
oh this is getting so very exciting, can't wait to see what Ueshiro has planned to hurt Takeo by hurting his beloved Ryan. aaaaaaaaa...pls. update soon!
9/5/2011 c13 NinaG
Hope you update soon, looking forward to Ryan and Takeo's love deepening and maturing as they learn more about each other. Wonderful story so far, love the pairing and the setting of this story is so interesting.
Hope you update soon, looking forward to Ryan and Takeo's love deepening and maturing as they learn more about each other. Wonderful story so far, love the pairing and the setting of this story is so interesting.
3/13/2011 c13 TokyosBiting
I like it and hope that another chapter is coming soon it seems as if the story is really starting to get good the characters so far are nicely developed and I can not wait for the climax! I don't even mind sneak peeks! Haha good luck! ;)
I like it and hope that another chapter is coming soon it seems as if the story is really starting to get good the characters so far are nicely developed and I can not wait for the climax! I don't even mind sneak peeks! Haha good luck! ;)
3/6/2011 c13 Wicked Neko
I knew it! I KNEW IIT! Ueshiro is nuts!
Loved the scene where he, um, took Takeo. I could imagine what was actually happening thanks to a few choice words... like "Takeo was screaming his name now" and "Takeo's body thrashed beneath him". Lol, more like trying to fight for his life. xD
Poor servant.
I hope you update sometime soon. I really enjoyed reading this and I would lurve to see some more cute lovin' between Takeo and Ryan. :)
I knew it! I KNEW IIT! Ueshiro is nuts!
Loved the scene where he, um, took Takeo. I could imagine what was actually happening thanks to a few choice words... like "Takeo was screaming his name now" and "Takeo's body thrashed beneath him". Lol, more like trying to fight for his life. xD
Poor servant.
I hope you update sometime soon. I really enjoyed reading this and I would lurve to see some more cute lovin' between Takeo and Ryan. :)
1/31/2011 c13 pop-thatbubble
This work is awesome! I really like how you incorporated real and accurate Japanese culture that many people who write Japan based fiction usually do not care much of!
This work is awesome! I really like how you incorporated real and accurate Japanese culture that many people who write Japan based fiction usually do not care much of!
5/18/2010 c13 3Site-3
Well Takeo might compel me to review but Takeo AND Ryan tell you to get off your lazy ass and UPDATE!
3Site-3Well Takeo might compel me to review but Takeo AND Ryan tell you to get off your lazy ass and UPDATE!
4/11/2010 c8 Nameless Shana
aw. It's gootta suck that your rapist got away T.T. Justin seems like a typical boyfriend.
aw. It's gootta suck that your rapist got away T.T. Justin seems like a typical boyfriend.
4/11/2010 c7 Nameless Shana
Wow, seven years chapters. I really like it the plot. It seems it's going to fast for some reason...Takeo seems nice but mysterious.
Wow, seven years chapters. I really like it the plot. It seems it's going to fast for some reason...Takeo seems nice but mysterious.
4/5/2010 c13 2YamiTenshiKoi
Great story so far! I stayed up all last night reading it, and I love it :) I sincerely hope you continue soon or I may die from suspense!
XOXO
Lexi
2YamiTenshiKoiGreat story so far! I stayed up all last night reading it, and I love it :) I sincerely hope you continue soon or I may die from suspense!
XOXO
Lexi