for The Boy Bride3/3/2010 c13 
1Karida
Really awesome story you have here, one of my absolute favorites on this site!
I really hope you update soon, the suspense is killer.
1KaridaReally awesome story you have here, one of my absolute favorites on this site!
I really hope you update soon, the suspense is killer.
2/26/2010 c13 TheFallenTime
Plz continue, it's very interesting!
Plz continue, it's very interesting!
1/30/2010 c5 Blooper256
I can't get a sense of what Ryan is dressed like during the wedding. I can't get the image of a man dressed as a geisha out of my mind. XD
But I really like the story and as other reviewers have pointed out, it is a very original concept! I'm still on ch. 5
Can't wait to keep reading.
I can't get a sense of what Ryan is dressed like during the wedding. I can't get the image of a man dressed as a geisha out of my mind. XD
But I really like the story and as other reviewers have pointed out, it is a very original concept! I'm still on ch. 5
Can't wait to keep reading.
12/25/2009 c13 Alpharoyale
Sugoi!Subarashi!
LOVE IT XD, And definitely, definitely can't wait to read MORE!
Sugoi!Subarashi!
LOVE IT XD, And definitely, definitely can't wait to read MORE!
11/25/2009 c13 frosty-the-radiator
The story caught my attention at once with the summary. I was blown over by just how amazing the story itself is though as I read my way through.
It's an interesting plot. I can easily say I've never read another story with a concept like this one. It's something very different, and fantastic all the same!
The scene in chapter twelve with the public display of affection in front of all those cameras and Sayako made my heart race with adrenaline, while agreeing with Ryan the whole time. But that's just one example. Your story is fantastic throughout, and I'm wishing you good luck!
The story caught my attention at once with the summary. I was blown over by just how amazing the story itself is though as I read my way through.
It's an interesting plot. I can easily say I've never read another story with a concept like this one. It's something very different, and fantastic all the same!
The scene in chapter twelve with the public display of affection in front of all those cameras and Sayako made my heart race with adrenaline, while agreeing with Ryan the whole time. But that's just one example. Your story is fantastic throughout, and I'm wishing you good luck!
7/22/2009 c13 16Yereanth16
this story is awesome! I am addicted to it.takeo san is cool!arigato for the chapter*give you cookies*
16Yereanth16this story is awesome! I am addicted to it.takeo san is cool!arigato for the chapter*give you cookies*
7/20/2009 c13 ddz008
Thanks for updating! Ueshiro is completely crazy... he scared me! He killed the poor boy... I hope he doesn't hurt them too much. T_T hope you update soon!
Thanks for updating! Ueshiro is completely crazy... he scared me! He killed the poor boy... I hope he doesn't hurt them too much. T_T hope you update soon!
7/16/2009 c13 Sirin Black
just reread this fic and i love it more and more =)
just reread this fic and i love it more and more =)
7/15/2009 c13 acorn2oak
Thank you SO much for updating! I know it's silly to get attached to an unfinished story but I was honestly bummed when I thought that you'd stopped writing. It was just by dim hope that I checked to see if by some miracle you'd picked it up again. *squel!*
Please continue the book. It's original and fascinating. You write very well, not that I'm much of a judge but I've read quite a few FictionPress stories. Yours is one of my favorites.
I'm starting to write one myself but I'm an artist, NOT a writer so I don't know if I'll post it. I so admire someone who can write. Maybe I'll draw you a pic for this story?
::HUGS::
& *Happy Dances*
Thank you SO much for updating! I know it's silly to get attached to an unfinished story but I was honestly bummed when I thought that you'd stopped writing. It was just by dim hope that I checked to see if by some miracle you'd picked it up again. *squel!*
Please continue the book. It's original and fascinating. You write very well, not that I'm much of a judge but I've read quite a few FictionPress stories. Yours is one of my favorites.
I'm starting to write one myself but I'm an artist, NOT a writer so I don't know if I'll post it. I so admire someone who can write. Maybe I'll draw you a pic for this story?
::HUGS::
& *Happy Dances*
7/10/2009 c13 xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx
Hey
Im glad that you updated this story, i seriously thought that it as gonna be on hiatus. Anyways , I love how it's going at the moment, though the most recent chapter was just a little strange. Did he kill the kid/servent he raped or is he just unconcious?
Well either way, I hope you get the next chapter out soon!
Thanks
x
Hey
Im glad that you updated this story, i seriously thought that it as gonna be on hiatus. Anyways , I love how it's going at the moment, though the most recent chapter was just a little strange. Did he kill the kid/servent he raped or is he just unconcious?
Well either way, I hope you get the next chapter out soon!
Thanks
x
7/9/2009 c13 Sirin Black
..he's twisted...awesome chapter!
..he's twisted...awesome chapter!
7/2/2009 c13 SHI-kun
I am enjoying this story very much. The setting, while unique, also holds true to what I've learned of Japanese culture. I can't find fault with the plot and absolutely love your context clues for the unexplained Japanese phrases, so I'm left with one question. I know my Japanese is very poor, but if I remember my class right, Ryan would be spelled Ra-i-a-n, right? I mean, that is the spelling that would keep the English pronunciation intact. Please keep writing,
Your new fan.
I am enjoying this story very much. The setting, while unique, also holds true to what I've learned of Japanese culture. I can't find fault with the plot and absolutely love your context clues for the unexplained Japanese phrases, so I'm left with one question. I know my Japanese is very poor, but if I remember my class right, Ryan would be spelled Ra-i-a-n, right? I mean, that is the spelling that would keep the English pronunciation intact. Please keep writing,
Your new fan.
7/2/2009 c13 misaki
is there going to be a new chapter anytime soon?
is there going to be a new chapter anytime soon?