for The Boy Bride2/18/2008 c2 
5Blank Sky
Ahh this is good from what I have read so far :DD
I wonder what's gonna happen? :O
5Blank SkyAhh this is good from what I have read so far :DD
I wonder what's gonna happen? :O
2/18/2008 c12 polka dot
mua ha! down with the snobby fan girl!
Love your whole story, hope you get to update soon!
mua ha! down with the snobby fan girl!
Love your whole story, hope you get to update soon!
2/15/2008 c12 Jadwiga
You updated at last! Yay! I enjoyed this chapter - the background exposition was done well so it was interesting and Takeo and Ryan are definitely developing into full rounded characters.
Also the plot is heating up a little! Which just adds even more flavour to the already good story.
Please don't leave it so long between updates though.
You updated at last! Yay! I enjoyed this chapter - the background exposition was done well so it was interesting and Takeo and Ryan are definitely developing into full rounded characters.
Also the plot is heating up a little! Which just adds even more flavour to the already good story.
Please don't leave it so long between updates though.
2/15/2008 c10 6LadyOfLiterature
My God do you write great sex scenes. Tender, but still oh, so hot.
**is flustered**
6LadyOfLiteratureMy God do you write great sex scenes. Tender, but still oh, so hot.
**is flustered**
2/15/2008 c9 LadyOfLiterature
I really enjoyed this. Love the characters, and your descriptive style, which is consice, but still manages to build a satisfying picture.
**off to read more**
I really enjoyed this. Love the characters, and your descriptive style, which is consice, but still manages to build a satisfying picture.
**off to read more**
2/13/2008 c12 kat
yay another great chapter! i'll be eagerly awaiting the next~
yay another great chapter! i'll be eagerly awaiting the next~
2/11/2008 c12 1KiyashiChan
Wow.. so i just found this, but I totally love it! Takeo sounds cute and Ryan is such a sweetie! Keep up the awesome work adn update soon!
1KiyashiChanWow.. so i just found this, but I totally love it! Takeo sounds cute and Ryan is such a sweetie! Keep up the awesome work adn update soon!
2/11/2008 c12 Lady Sesshou
I'm glad you updated. I love this story so much.
I'm glad you updated. I love this story so much.
2/10/2008 c12 15Switch
Thank you SO MUCH for updating!I LOVELOVELOVE this story! Ryan is so adorable. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
15SwitchThank you SO MUCH for updating!I LOVELOVELOVE this story! Ryan is so adorable. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
2/10/2008 c12 ddz008
Good chapter! It had been so long since you updated and I should be doing my homework but I had to read it :) Things are getting interesting, I didn't he was so important and famous. And all this politica schemes. Hope you update soon! :)
Good chapter! It had been so long since you updated and I should be doing my homework but I had to read it :) Things are getting interesting, I didn't he was so important and famous. And all this politica schemes. Hope you update soon! :)
2/10/2008 c11 Neko6892
I love this story,but you haven't updated in a long time TT
Please update!Don't let such a good story go to waste please!
I love this story,but you haven't updated in a long time TT
Please update!Don't let such a good story go to waste please!
1/28/2008 c8 a.notherzhang
Huh, so this is what I get for reviewing before I've finished what you've already put up...
So I guess the two main characters aren't necessarily much different from what I've seen before (shy and bold, etc.), but it's like they're a lot more well-rounded and real. Which is defintely good.
This chapter was so sweet-excluding the almost-rape, of course.
Huh, so this is what I get for reviewing before I've finished what you've already put up...
So I guess the two main characters aren't necessarily much different from what I've seen before (shy and bold, etc.), but it's like they're a lot more well-rounded and real. Which is defintely good.
This chapter was so sweet-excluding the almost-rape, of course.
1/28/2008 c6 a.notherzhang
I like this a lot; it's not really a common slashfic when it comes to the characters themselves. Or so I think, but I've only recently started reading slashfics (and they all seem the same).
As an added note, you were born only five days before my sister! (Including year.) I got excited about it because my own birthday is a week before hers (Oct. 14), though I'm a few years younger.
I like this a lot; it's not really a common slashfic when it comes to the characters themselves. Or so I think, but I've only recently started reading slashfics (and they all seem the same).
As an added note, you were born only five days before my sister! (Including year.) I got excited about it because my own birthday is a week before hers (Oct. 14), though I'm a few years younger.
1/12/2008 c11 TheGodMachine
This story is so good. I love how I'm learning Japanese just from reading this. Can't wait to learn more about Ueshiro, so you need to update soon.
This story is so good. I love how I'm learning Japanese just from reading this. Can't wait to learn more about Ueshiro, so you need to update soon.