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10/18/2003 c2 3Le Creature
This is interesting. The story at this point seems to just be defining the weapons and equipment they use, though, instead of the characters or such. An interesting approach to world building, chap.

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10/12/2003 c1 The Fictionpress Historian
Well, sir, you seem to be often fulled of a lot of misconstrued notions, but you at least have the capacity to write a decent story. I focus my stories more on modern day, so I may be a little out of date with sci-fi terminology. Pray tell, sir, just what exactly is "neutronium?" And could you give a run-down of some of your more fictitious weapons? It would be duly appreciated.

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