for Blackout10/11/2003 c1 
2swimming in kerosene
"her pen sounds oddly fitful, scratching
almost frantically against the paper now that
the computer has simplified into a dull, empty
box, a meaningless construct of smooth black-beige. "
I can identify...after Isobel (the hurricane), I was without electricity for six days-although I was nowhere near as eloquent in expressing my frustration. As always, your talent amazes me.
2swimming in kerosene"her pen sounds oddly fitful, scratching
almost frantically against the paper now that
the computer has simplified into a dull, empty
box, a meaningless construct of smooth black-beige. "
I can identify...after Isobel (the hurricane), I was without electricity for six days-although I was nowhere near as eloquent in expressing my frustration. As always, your talent amazes me.
10/11/2003 c1 41ionlyliveindreams
Hey, cool poem. I especially like the baggage part. I think a lot of people are carrying around too much emotional baggage - I know I am. I'm not sure if that's what you meant, but that's what I got out of it. Anyways, good job.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
41ionlyliveindreamsHey, cool poem. I especially like the baggage part. I think a lot of people are carrying around too much emotional baggage - I know I am. I'm not sure if that's what you meant, but that's what I got out of it. Anyways, good job.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
10/11/2003 c1 79CrimsonCat
Soon my favorite story list will exist with only your poems on it.
The last stanza is my favorite.
You always go away, and come back with new tricks. New ways of fitting the words together, new ways to make things sound and look and seem. You are my poetic idle. And I love you.
79CrimsonCatSoon my favorite story list will exist with only your poems on it.
The last stanza is my favorite.
You always go away, and come back with new tricks. New ways of fitting the words together, new ways to make things sound and look and seem. You are my poetic idle. And I love you.