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1/5/2004 c1 150SpawnMeister666
This is an interesting start for sure. Okay, serious editing needed, but nothing too difficult. Personally, I want to know more!
Spawny
10/14/2003 c1 Marumae
Interesting...I'm reading your story since I started a new policy to read whatever story of the person who reviews my story so...here I am! I can see smidgens of excellent story telling capabilities in there but juding by the authors note you clearly don't care about this story _ too bad, because with some beta editing to correct spelling, remove some uncessary parts and fix the switching tenses you'd have an interesting story though. Keep up the good work!

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