for Just Smile11/7/2003 c1 
117Seras Nova
That was wonderful, although I wish there was a happier ending to it. But you just keep smiling and everything will be okay.
Keep writing
-Seras
117Seras NovaThat was wonderful, although I wish there was a happier ending to it. But you just keep smiling and everything will be okay.
Keep writing
-Seras
10/13/2003 c1 196Damaged
^_^ How sweet! It captures the feeling of one moment perfectly! There's great imagery too! Keep it up! (homecoming's great, right? ^_~ )
196Damaged^_^ How sweet! It captures the feeling of one moment perfectly! There's great imagery too! Keep it up! (homecoming's great, right? ^_~ )
10/13/2003 c1 70insert name here
wow...speechless, that was amazing, u truely described the feelings of that first slow dance with the one u love, that was just like amazing, powerful
keep writing
~brendz~
70insert name herewow...speechless, that was amazing, u truely described the feelings of that first slow dance with the one u love, that was just like amazing, powerful
keep writing
~brendz~
10/13/2003 c1 132Sarah Parker
Aw...! This is so sweet.. and cute.. and beautiful...! This is an adorable poem.. so absolutely beautiful. Your happiness is quite apparent throughout the entire poem and it made ME smile. I'm glad that you had at least a night of happiness... and this proves that you can write fluff poetry just as wonderfully as your angst. It's too cute. Keep smiling.
132Sarah ParkerAw...! This is so sweet.. and cute.. and beautiful...! This is an adorable poem.. so absolutely beautiful. Your happiness is quite apparent throughout the entire poem and it made ME smile. I'm glad that you had at least a night of happiness... and this proves that you can write fluff poetry just as wonderfully as your angst. It's too cute. Keep smiling.