for Spin Doctor12/10/2003 c1 AVIGON
Stop doing this to me!
"she has learned to twist words so that everything seems okay." It's such a simple phrase, yet you make it into so much more by working to a climax in 1.
I know I keep repeating myself, but... it's really a good poem.
Stop doing this to me!
"she has learned to twist words so that everything seems okay." It's such a simple phrase, yet you make it into so much more by working to a climax in 1.
I know I keep repeating myself, but... it's really a good poem.
10/17/2003 c1 
79CrimsonCat
Those last couple of lines were so sharp that I may have cut myself on them. So honest that it hurt. Maybe the real pain comes from being able to see myself reflected in them..
You're still leaving me breathless.
79CrimsonCatThose last couple of lines were so sharp that I may have cut myself on them. So honest that it hurt. Maybe the real pain comes from being able to see myself reflected in them..
You're still leaving me breathless.
10/13/2003 c1 2swimming in kerosene
/she has learned to twist words so that
everything seems okay./
i know someone just like that. breathtaking.
2swimming in kerosene/she has learned to twist words so that
everything seems okay./
i know someone just like that. breathtaking.
10/12/2003 c1 38The Teaspoon Faery
wow i'm reading all your work and it's all totally amazing. you have a real gift with words. this poem is very...poignant, i think. no, that's not really the word i'm looking for...oh well, it'll have to do. anyway what i'm trying to say is, all your poetry rocks. it's very expressive and sharp. this is the stuff i dream of writing...you're definately going on my fave authors list! oh and thanks for the review.
38The Teaspoon Faerywow i'm reading all your work and it's all totally amazing. you have a real gift with words. this poem is very...poignant, i think. no, that's not really the word i'm looking for...oh well, it'll have to do. anyway what i'm trying to say is, all your poetry rocks. it's very expressive and sharp. this is the stuff i dream of writing...you're definately going on my fave authors list! oh and thanks for the review.