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10/17/2003 c1 79CrimsonCat
I like it.. but i think i know what you mean about the first verse. It felt like you were trying to say too much at once. More emotion than the first stanza could handle maybe?

Overall though, I really like this poem. Especially that last verse. The last verse is beautiful.
10/12/2003 c1 37wingless
i actually really like this poem. it has this delicate sense of reality, but all told in a vague sort of way, taunting the reader with small snippets... beautiful

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