
10/17/2003 c1
79CrimsonCat
oh. god... This is.. wow. Jaclyn, you've left me without words. I keep re-reading it.. and it just gets more and more beautiful.
soft as death and honey - amazing line. It gives off an unbelievable feeling.
But above all, I love 'no one's going to save you;/and redemotion is just/something we made up.'
It's so heartbreaking.. so brutal and so damned TRUE! It feels real. It feels like you have captured the meaning behind everything in this. I have to go and build a shrine in your honour.. you are my new god.

oh. god... This is.. wow. Jaclyn, you've left me without words. I keep re-reading it.. and it just gets more and more beautiful.
soft as death and honey - amazing line. It gives off an unbelievable feeling.
But above all, I love 'no one's going to save you;/and redemotion is just/something we made up.'
It's so heartbreaking.. so brutal and so damned TRUE! It feels real. It feels like you have captured the meaning behind everything in this. I have to go and build a shrine in your honour.. you are my new god.