Reviews: Two hands linked one black one white

7/31/2004 c1

15dbz 77
Nice story, though it could have used a steamy sex scene.

10/14/2003 c1

2Nothing-But-Truth
I think it's really good, It only needs to be longer, Ya know?

~*You crazy little angle Maygan

10/13/2003 c1 JazzeeT
it a nice skim of things with you know? it was really nice reading. great