for Perchance To Dream10/30/2006 c5 Iren Masot
*tears of joy*
an update...
*clouds open, beam of light shines down, angels sing "hallelujiah"*
wait...
*record grinds*
I still haven't read it yet...XD I hope it's good...
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yes! I love it!
*tears of joy*
an update...
*clouds open, beam of light shines down, angels sing "hallelujiah"*
wait...
*record grinds*
I still haven't read it yet...XD I hope it's good...
...
yes! I love it!
10/21/2006 c5 Alaurei
Woohoo! We're back! (does a dance) I am so happy to see at least one of us writing again, and you know what, I'm really glad it was you because I love this story and I can't wait to see where it goes!
Well, it did take me a while to remember what was going on. I had to go back and read the last chapter and such, but that all worked out. Poor Drav, all of these asides, he's taking all of this upon himself! He needs a shrink I tell you! (shakes fist)
I love how you describe all of the different types of dragons. Especially the storm dragons with their eletric features! Like when Audra was crying, at the very end, and ran off, everything was sparking. That was really cool. I just love the way you write because it all makes sense and flows so smoothly. I only hope I write as well as you do at that age.
Keep up the great work and I can't wait to hear more from you! Best of luck in college as well.
-Nicki
Woohoo! We're back! (does a dance) I am so happy to see at least one of us writing again, and you know what, I'm really glad it was you because I love this story and I can't wait to see where it goes!
Well, it did take me a while to remember what was going on. I had to go back and read the last chapter and such, but that all worked out. Poor Drav, all of these asides, he's taking all of this upon himself! He needs a shrink I tell you! (shakes fist)
I love how you describe all of the different types of dragons. Especially the storm dragons with their eletric features! Like when Audra was crying, at the very end, and ran off, everything was sparking. That was really cool. I just love the way you write because it all makes sense and flows so smoothly. I only hope I write as well as you do at that age.
Keep up the great work and I can't wait to hear more from you! Best of luck in college as well.
-Nicki
10/2/2004 c4 Katana Terra Millennium Dragon
Woah...what's this site again? XD Nearly forgot about it. Oh well. I'm glad I could read more of your fic! Loved the chapter. The surprise ending of the battle was also quite interesting. Didn't really expect Dravidian to kill. Then there's Silver suddenly snapping at Luna. Poor Luna. T_T Can't wait to read the next chappie! ^_^
Ja Matta!
~Katana the Singing Idiot (AKA Terra Millennium Dragon or Kinryou...though that's meh OC)
PS: Dude am I slow (and sounding like Oki)...so slow that I only now realized that you mentioned my old fic on your bio page. Arigatou! ^^ Of course, it went poofie a while ago. XD Katana-baka only writes on FanFiction...and soon only on NaNoWriMo. Oh, by the way, are you going to do that this year? If so, I'll have to slime over there and read your fic! ^_^ See ya!
Woah...what's this site again? XD Nearly forgot about it. Oh well. I'm glad I could read more of your fic! Loved the chapter. The surprise ending of the battle was also quite interesting. Didn't really expect Dravidian to kill. Then there's Silver suddenly snapping at Luna. Poor Luna. T_T Can't wait to read the next chappie! ^_^
Ja Matta!
~Katana the Singing Idiot (AKA Terra Millennium Dragon or Kinryou...though that's meh OC)
PS: Dude am I slow (and sounding like Oki)...so slow that I only now realized that you mentioned my old fic on your bio page. Arigatou! ^^ Of course, it went poofie a while ago. XD Katana-baka only writes on FanFiction...and soon only on NaNoWriMo. Oh, by the way, are you going to do that this year? If so, I'll have to slime over there and read your fic! ^_^ See ya!
7/29/2004 c4 
3EisoftheSnow
oh...poor Luna, I feel so bad for him, he tries! I wonder why Silver is so fed up with him, I always thought Silver was less severe, and the conspiracy! If only Cytosine knew!
Dravadian seems to be going through some personal problems, will this guilt reflect into his attitude towards everyone?
And am i the only one who thinks that this Darien is our favorite felida's new love intrest? i'm probably way off track, but i feel like theres some kind of tension between the two.
Loved the fight scene! Can't wait to encounter more dragons! yay!
~D.V.D~
3EisoftheSnowoh...poor Luna, I feel so bad for him, he tries! I wonder why Silver is so fed up with him, I always thought Silver was less severe, and the conspiracy! If only Cytosine knew!
Dravadian seems to be going through some personal problems, will this guilt reflect into his attitude towards everyone?
And am i the only one who thinks that this Darien is our favorite felida's new love intrest? i'm probably way off track, but i feel like theres some kind of tension between the two.
Loved the fight scene! Can't wait to encounter more dragons! yay!
~D.V.D~
7/2/2004 c1 44Kerensky
All of a sudden I want a Galex. :D The story is wonderful, sorry that it took me so long to get around to finally starting it. I also finished the first, and was quite impressed with how it all turned out. I must admit my favourite is Scout. lol.
"The blood of countless warriors flows within me, and I will not disgrace my heritage because of my mistakes."
44KerenskyAll of a sudden I want a Galex. :D The story is wonderful, sorry that it took me so long to get around to finally starting it. I also finished the first, and was quite impressed with how it all turned out. I must admit my favourite is Scout. lol.
"The blood of countless warriors flows within me, and I will not disgrace my heritage because of my mistakes."
5/31/2004 c4 8Kezkay
I'm-a back! No, I have not died, but I was entombed (with school)! yesyes, back to what -matters- here:
Mua ha ha, setting matches mood? Yesyes, precious. Very cute oceanic interlude. I remember my dad described the ocean to me when I was five as "the big pool." 0oo, Cytosine's in one nasty mood, acting very cat-like, me likes.
In the one paraghraph where Darien is explaining the storms, "soul" is used quite a lot, though I can't see how you could fix it...not many words in the thesaurus for that one ^^ Just letting you know. Also, very poignant last line in that paragraph.
oh, cool! Dragons have different power-thingies too? Mweh heh heh. I must get me one of these golden ones. Yes, precious...
"...their fur fluffed up from the static energy." HAHAHA!
Ah, have we a dragon with split-personalities on our hands? The conversation between Taranis (tres cool name ;) and Dravidian is super, but I think it might be better if you edited out this line: "I’m afraid you shall soon find out!", and instead have him just charge or something?
Hmm, I like the serious role that Silver has taken on, but it seems slightly out of character to me. The two were always so carefree before.
Interesting turn of events here with the twins.. too immersed to comment, just a sec... aww, so sad! I never knew Silver felt like that!
This other power that Taranis has is..intriging! I would have never thought to use compulsion in that sense as a control over something else! Cool!
"Taranis at least looked peaceful, despite his neck jutting out at an odd angle." That is a very disturbing image. Not at all peaceful. *shivers* 0oo
Gah! Dravidian! Stay good! Stay good! No!
Such a long, nice chapter! ^^
-Kez
8KezkayI'm-a back! No, I have not died, but I was entombed (with school)! yesyes, back to what -matters- here:
Mua ha ha, setting matches mood? Yesyes, precious. Very cute oceanic interlude. I remember my dad described the ocean to me when I was five as "the big pool." 0oo, Cytosine's in one nasty mood, acting very cat-like, me likes.
In the one paraghraph where Darien is explaining the storms, "soul" is used quite a lot, though I can't see how you could fix it...not many words in the thesaurus for that one ^^ Just letting you know. Also, very poignant last line in that paragraph.
oh, cool! Dragons have different power-thingies too? Mweh heh heh. I must get me one of these golden ones. Yes, precious...
"...their fur fluffed up from the static energy." HAHAHA!
Ah, have we a dragon with split-personalities on our hands? The conversation between Taranis (tres cool name ;) and Dravidian is super, but I think it might be better if you edited out this line: "I’m afraid you shall soon find out!", and instead have him just charge or something?
Hmm, I like the serious role that Silver has taken on, but it seems slightly out of character to me. The two were always so carefree before.
Interesting turn of events here with the twins.. too immersed to comment, just a sec... aww, so sad! I never knew Silver felt like that!
This other power that Taranis has is..intriging! I would have never thought to use compulsion in that sense as a control over something else! Cool!
"Taranis at least looked peaceful, despite his neck jutting out at an odd angle." That is a very disturbing image. Not at all peaceful. *shivers* 0oo
Gah! Dravidian! Stay good! Stay good! No!
Such a long, nice chapter! ^^
-Kez
5/31/2004 c4 31Aedyn Star
aw poor luna. i'd say hes one of my favorite characters. so underappreciated. this is a really inolved story.im confused, but it is a good confused, like why Taranis acted the way he did and this strange power of Luna's...please keep writing and upadate soon!
31Aedyn Staraw poor luna. i'd say hes one of my favorite characters. so underappreciated. this is a really inolved story.im confused, but it is a good confused, like why Taranis acted the way he did and this strange power of Luna's...please keep writing and upadate soon!
5/31/2004 c3 Aedyn Star
yea i lvoe unicorns, they are really interesting. a side comment, read Andrew NOrton's the Elvenbane, he depicts unicorns in a strange way. anyway, please continue, i love prophecies and such!
yea i lvoe unicorns, they are really interesting. a side comment, read Andrew NOrton's the Elvenbane, he depicts unicorns in a strange way. anyway, please continue, i love prophecies and such!
5/31/2004 c1 Aedyn Star
cool. ive only read hte first chapter of this sotyr, but it really interesting. when i get round to it i will definetly read the others and you other stories too. did u no Cytosine is the name of a Dna link thing? just an interesting connection. cant wait to find out what happens!
cool. ive only read hte first chapter of this sotyr, but it really interesting. when i get round to it i will definetly read the others and you other stories too. did u no Cytosine is the name of a Dna link thing? just an interesting connection. cant wait to find out what happens!
4/2/2004 c1 11ladylore
wow...there really are no more words that I can use to describe this chapter...bloody brilliant! Ok, I know, I know, this is a really crappy review - but you have taken the words right out of my mouth! Excellent! I love it!
Thanks, Please R+R me - Lore.
11ladylorewow...there really are no more words that I can use to describe this chapter...bloody brilliant! Ok, I know, I know, this is a really crappy review - but you have taken the words right out of my mouth! Excellent! I love it!
Thanks, Please R+R me - Lore.
3/29/2004 c4 20Silence's Song
Wow...that's a lot to absorb! The whole Silver and Luna conflict nearly made me cry...poor Luna!
And what was with the fight between the storm dragon and Drav? Things keep getting odder an odder. This is definitely got me hooked.
Great chapter! I found one thing that could be fixed though : "Endless water with no end" To me that seems redundant. Maybe you could just say "Water with no end" or "Endless water" It just bothered me slightly. Sorry.
Great job though!
Stat points: whatever Dark is lacking.
20Silence's SongWow...that's a lot to absorb! The whole Silver and Luna conflict nearly made me cry...poor Luna!
And what was with the fight between the storm dragon and Drav? Things keep getting odder an odder. This is definitely got me hooked.
Great chapter! I found one thing that could be fixed though : "Endless water with no end" To me that seems redundant. Maybe you could just say "Water with no end" or "Endless water" It just bothered me slightly. Sorry.
Great job though!
Stat points: whatever Dark is lacking.
3/29/2004 c3 Silence's Song
PHWEE! My two favorite creatures of all time are dragons and unicorns. In that order. So, I'm naturally thrilled about the two new unicorn characters! Very cool! I can't wait to read what happens!
Add points where ever Dark needs it the most please!
PHWEE! My two favorite creatures of all time are dragons and unicorns. In that order. So, I'm naturally thrilled about the two new unicorn characters! Very cool! I can't wait to read what happens!
Add points where ever Dark needs it the most please!
3/18/2004 c4 18Quill of Molliemon
Wow...
That's about all I can think to say about this, just wow...
Some dark force seems to be behind the dragon fight... *shivers* Creepy...
I can't wait to see what happens when they meet the storm dragons, it should be very interesting I think...
Good luck with the writing!
^_^
18Quill of MolliemonWow...
That's about all I can think to say about this, just wow...
Some dark force seems to be behind the dragon fight... *shivers* Creepy...
I can't wait to see what happens when they meet the storm dragons, it should be very interesting I think...
Good luck with the writing!
^_^