for Children of Death3/21/2005 c10 
13Sanguina
AGH! DAVID YOU JERK!you left it on a cliffhanger...anyway...as I told you in the hall, very good! Your writing style is so powerful... it kept me on my toes the whole time... you have no idea. Spelling could be better but I'm understanding ^_^EXCELLENT. I must read the next 3...^_^keep it up!~Raya (Meredith)
13SanguinaAGH! DAVID YOU JERK!you left it on a cliffhanger...anyway...as I told you in the hall, very good! Your writing style is so powerful... it kept me on my toes the whole time... you have no idea. Spelling could be better but I'm understanding ^_^EXCELLENT. I must read the next 3...^_^keep it up!~Raya (Meredith)
11/15/2003 c3 15Obsidian Night
This is good. I love a good vampire story. I have to go now but I'll be back later to read the rest of this. I'm sure it will be good. ~.^
15Obsidian NightThis is good. I love a good vampire story. I have to go now but I'll be back later to read the rest of this. I'm sure it will be good. ~.^
11/5/2003 c1 9Dante Gemini
Wow, this is interesting so far. Keep writing. I will try to read more later. Read and review my stuff if you get the chance.
9Dante GeminiWow, this is interesting so far. Keep writing. I will try to read more later. Read and review my stuff if you get the chance.
10/14/2003 c2 4Jeff A Stern
Ha ha! Good less work for me!
Hey david!
I WAS gonna surprise you by putting up the story on the site but I guess not :( I'll leave my copy up though *2 lazy to take it down* I may not edit it. Good job though for finding out about Fiction Press (Isn't it a good website) *shrughs* All right, talk 2 yu soon.
-Jeff
4Jeff A SternHa ha! Good less work for me!
Hey david!
I WAS gonna surprise you by putting up the story on the site but I guess not :( I'll leave my copy up though *2 lazy to take it down* I may not edit it. Good job though for finding out about Fiction Press (Isn't it a good website) *shrughs* All right, talk 2 yu soon.
-Jeff