for As I Lay Here R&R1/23/2004 c1 
9Squeakers
i like it. wow. that's all that i can say. sorry for not writen back in a while i just havent had time. well this was good. going into faves.
9Squeakersi like it. wow. that's all that i can say. sorry for not writen back in a while i just havent had time. well this was good. going into faves.
10/15/2003 c1 28DeadRaven69
OMG! this is so amazing, in every way. the emotion portrayed and the uneven rhyming, is so well put together. i love the topic, and the metaphors. definetly going on my fav stories...
28DeadRaven69OMG! this is so amazing, in every way. the emotion portrayed and the uneven rhyming, is so well put together. i love the topic, and the metaphors. definetly going on my fav stories...
10/15/2003 c1 82pippin tomson
It was written in a very free way. It's sorta depressing, but a strong read. Good work.
82pippin tomsonIt was written in a very free way. It's sorta depressing, but a strong read. Good work.