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12SkyeWolf25
Interesting start here Alareic, I like it though. Pretty good, pretty good, though I defenitaly like TTD and CA the best. Still I'll continue on. Also, I have just updated a story you reviewed a while back, "The Legend of Macanar and Tarlna". Well catch ya later.
12SkyeWolf25Interesting start here Alareic, I like it though. Pretty good, pretty good, though I defenitaly like TTD and CA the best. Still I'll continue on. Also, I have just updated a story you reviewed a while back, "The Legend of Macanar and Tarlna". Well catch ya later.
7/2/2004 c17 2Callie Rose
Wow this was very interesting. i feel bad for Kaia. I really liked Jason. but oh well.
2Callie RoseWow this was very interesting. i feel bad for Kaia. I really liked Jason. but oh well.
6/28/2004 c17 11Wolfie Star26
love it and sorry for not reading it sooner, but i do have a few fics. hehe anyway, i love this and now on to the sequel. lata.
11Wolfie Star26love it and sorry for not reading it sooner, but i do have a few fics. hehe anyway, i love this and now on to the sequel. lata.
12/24/2003 c17 daynaflame
WOnderful story! ! ! ! ! Can't wait for the sequel! ! ! ! ! ^_^
(sorry . . . I'm a little to happy today)
^_~ Winter Dream ^_~
WOnderful story! ! ! ! ! Can't wait for the sequel! ! ! ! ! ^_^
(sorry . . . I'm a little to happy today)
^_~ Winter Dream ^_~
12/23/2003 c17 13KimmyStarr
great story. i really like it. some part could probaly be beefed up abit. And i still can't believe Jason died.
13KimmyStarrgreat story. i really like it. some part could probaly be beefed up abit. And i still can't believe Jason died.
11/21/2003 c1 L0O
C0O0O0OL , OK I GOTTA GO SLEEP NOW MY EYES HURT !
C0O0O0OL , OK I GOTTA GO SLEEP NOW MY EYES HURT !
11/18/2003 c5 10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Ok, that last bit was slightly confusing. I'm gonna have to add this to my favorites so i can finish it later.
10DrunkenMonkeyKingOk, that last bit was slightly confusing. I'm gonna have to add this to my favorites so i can finish it later.
11/18/2003 c4 DrunkenMonkeyKing
Not to much to say this chapter, but its starting to seem a bit more goofy than horrifying. Not sure if you were going for that or not... Maybe it's just the light-hearted opening of your story...
Not to much to say this chapter, but its starting to seem a bit more goofy than horrifying. Not sure if you were going for that or not... Maybe it's just the light-hearted opening of your story...
11/18/2003 c3 DrunkenMonkeyKing
Great finish for this chapter, but like I said before, stuff seems to happen to quickly. Plus, Jason's mom said to be back before eight... yet they left at 7:46... ok, so maybe 8 in the morning?
Great finish for this chapter, but like I said before, stuff seems to happen to quickly. Plus, Jason's mom said to be back before eight... yet they left at 7:46... ok, so maybe 8 in the morning?
11/18/2003 c2 DrunkenMonkeyKing
Good story, (as you know if I'm still reading it) however, things seemed to be moving a bit too fast. Plus, the thing with Julian giving the doctor a note five minutes before he died? seemed, kinda, well... unrealistic. I'll keep reading though, so don't take my comments too harshly.
Good story, (as you know if I'm still reading it) however, things seemed to be moving a bit too fast. Plus, the thing with Julian giving the doctor a note five minutes before he died? seemed, kinda, well... unrealistic. I'll keep reading though, so don't take my comments too harshly.
11/15/2003 c17 8furry creature
realy good! it finished at the right itme, and you've ended it for a sequel so i'm definetly gonna read the next.well done, a god stor,y bu in the next one, make your chapters longer please? anyways, that was great, really, well done. furry creature wasmy old name, and i changed it back. well done. really.you're laready on my favourites
8furry creaturerealy good! it finished at the right itme, and you've ended it for a sequel so i'm definetly gonna read the next.well done, a god stor,y bu in the next one, make your chapters longer please? anyways, that was great, really, well done. furry creature wasmy old name, and i changed it back. well done. really.you're laready on my favourites
11/14/2003 c17 105emo love
so this is the end of this one and they're goin in a huge war? of what? wolves? hmm...i guess that's pretty cool...
gj ^.^
105emo loveso this is the end of this one and they're goin in a huge war? of what? wolves? hmm...i guess that's pretty cool...
gj ^.^
11/12/2003 c15 emo love
...i like bob...he's pimp...
but i'm sorrie, i don't have ne ideas for an ending...
but this is a good story...
...i like bob...he's pimp...
but i'm sorrie, i don't have ne ideas for an ending...
but this is a good story...
11/12/2003 c15 daynaflame
Just finished reading . . . And I dont really have any ideas for an ending . . . but I hope somebody does! ^_^
^_~ Winter Dream ^_~
Just finished reading . . . And I dont really have any ideas for an ending . . . but I hope somebody does! ^_^
^_~ Winter Dream ^_~
11/12/2003 c10 daynaflame
OK I've read 10 chapters! *Go me!* I'm gonna read the rest later . . . but this story is the BEST! ^_^ Good job! ^_^
^_~ Winter Dream ^_~
OK I've read 10 chapters! *Go me!* I'm gonna read the rest later . . . but this story is the BEST! ^_^ Good job! ^_^
^_~ Winter Dream ^_~