for Moonlights' Witness10/29/2003 c3 frozenflames
wow! i really enjoyed your story. i like the mysteries and relationships between the characters, and how you're able to hold the reader's attention. your writing style is good too.
there are only trivial spelling mistakes here and there, but overall i can't pick anything else out (besides the fact that the chapters are repeated).
keep writing! :) (oh, can you tell me what's going to happen? i promise i won't tell! ;) )
wow! i really enjoyed your story. i like the mysteries and relationships between the characters, and how you're able to hold the reader's attention. your writing style is good too.
there are only trivial spelling mistakes here and there, but overall i can't pick anything else out (besides the fact that the chapters are repeated).
keep writing! :) (oh, can you tell me what's going to happen? i promise i won't tell! ;) )
10/18/2003 c1 Trinity of Dreams
You have interested, intrigued, confused, saddened, angered me in ways i did not think possibe. I loved it it was confuse in if you will answer this question: will there be a happy ending?
You have interested, intrigued, confused, saddened, angered me in ways i did not think possibe. I loved it it was confuse in if you will answer this question: will there be a happy ending?
10/16/2003 c1 
30Roadside Dryer
I like your story. I can't read it all now so I'll find it later. One tip though is add so more detail. It's really good though.
^ ^
-he he
30Roadside DryerI like your story. I can't read it all now so I'll find it later. One tip though is add so more detail. It's really good though.
^ ^
-he he