for The Ticket to Smartification1/4/2006 c1 
1bongogirl
Fun-ney! I like it! I think you should... never mind. Lost my train of thought. Oh yea, you should right a longer story to go with it. You know, like someone that invents those ghost seeing-glasses... No idea what I am talking about.
1bongogirlFun-ney! I like it! I think you should... never mind. Lost my train of thought. Oh yea, you should right a longer story to go with it. You know, like someone that invents those ghost seeing-glasses... No idea what I am talking about.
12/23/2004 c1 6Green Beret
the randomest story so far that ive read. its more of a monologue really - but done very well and its really funny.
i cant really comment on how to improve it simply because its so original that theres nothing at all to compare it to.
good one.
6Green Beretthe randomest story so far that ive read. its more of a monologue really - but done very well and its really funny.
i cant really comment on how to improve it simply because its so original that theres nothing at all to compare it to.
good one.
5/8/2004 c1 11Never Knows Best
I tried putting my fingers up my nose and blowing, but all I got was a big headache. And my nails hurt my nose too. I don't feel any smarter. In fact, I'm pretty sure I've justr destroyed some important brain cells. Do you think some brain cells are actually more important than others? Oh well, who knows, it doesn't matters anyways, as I am now stupid enough to come back as a ghost and float to Mars.
YAY!
~Lee~
11Never Knows BestI tried putting my fingers up my nose and blowing, but all I got was a big headache. And my nails hurt my nose too. I don't feel any smarter. In fact, I'm pretty sure I've justr destroyed some important brain cells. Do you think some brain cells are actually more important than others? Oh well, who knows, it doesn't matters anyways, as I am now stupid enough to come back as a ghost and float to Mars.
YAY!
~Lee~
1/25/2004 c1 1Aureole
Geeze. I choked on that second to last paragraph. *Places 'Danger to health' sign at the bottom of her review*
1AureoleGeeze. I choked on that second to last paragraph. *Places 'Danger to health' sign at the bottom of her review*
12/20/2003 c1 9AnyaAnanda
yea! lol, that was a very interesting point. to tell you the truth, i have never thought that much about that before. have you tryed to get smarter yet?
9AnyaAnandayea! lol, that was a very interesting point. to tell you the truth, i have never thought that much about that before. have you tryed to get smarter yet?
12/13/2003 c1 2The Pretenders
hahaha. That is really funny. I think i am going to mars... nevermind. i didn't say that. ^_^ Thank you so much for reading my chapters. You read to chapter 2 according to the reviews. Thank you for the correction notes, I will be right on it. I just have so much it slips by sometimes. :D anyways. I PROMISE you the chapters get better as you go alone. Just get though the first three or four and the action picks up with the pace! :) You made my day better. Have a goodone!
2The Pretendershahaha. That is really funny. I think i am going to mars... nevermind. i didn't say that. ^_^ Thank you so much for reading my chapters. You read to chapter 2 according to the reviews. Thank you for the correction notes, I will be right on it. I just have so much it slips by sometimes. :D anyways. I PROMISE you the chapters get better as you go alone. Just get though the first three or four and the action picks up with the pace! :) You made my day better. Have a goodone!
11/26/2003 c1 3Lunch
Hahahaahha. This sounds like something that I might come up with. I love the casual style and ridiculous continuity. I wait with baited breath for any future installments.
P.S. thanks for reviewing mine, i was beginning to think nobody cared.
3LunchHahahaahha. This sounds like something that I might come up with. I love the casual style and ridiculous continuity. I wait with baited breath for any future installments.
P.S. thanks for reviewing mine, i was beginning to think nobody cared.
10/18/2003 c1 5Swimming in a Fish Bowl
my oh my my dear, you are insane.
wanna join my club?
IE: penguins ARE NOT evil in my story, that'd be too creepy
5Swimming in a Fish Bowlmy oh my my dear, you are insane.
wanna join my club?
IE: penguins ARE NOT evil in my story, that'd be too creepy
10/17/2003 c1 4LilGrimmy
I liked it, especially how the starting topic was getting smarter by blowing really hard out of your nose while your nostrils are covered and some how you've managed to end up with stupid ghosts on Mars. But heres something, what would happen to Steven Hawkin (sp?). Heys possibly the smartest man in the world, but he's parapeligic (sp) so how would he die and go to Mars? He's too smart for that, but he never used your little theory! Aha! Damn, I lost it. Good work. :)
4LilGrimmyI liked it, especially how the starting topic was getting smarter by blowing really hard out of your nose while your nostrils are covered and some how you've managed to end up with stupid ghosts on Mars. But heres something, what would happen to Steven Hawkin (sp?). Heys possibly the smartest man in the world, but he's parapeligic (sp) so how would he die and go to Mars? He's too smart for that, but he never used your little theory! Aha! Damn, I lost it. Good work. :)
10/17/2003 c1 Ekwy
Hehehe... Hilarious! I liked it. *chuckle*
Hehehe... Hilarious! I liked it. *chuckle*