for Blood, Sweat and Tears2/22/2013 c1 
9XDon'tEatTheCeleryX
Wow. I have never really thought about this before. A unique and interesting poem; well done!
9XDon'tEatTheCeleryXWow. I have never really thought about this before. A unique and interesting poem; well done!
9/16/2010 c1 4xXTheRealSlimBabbii7Xx
that was good :) i liked how you tied the title into the actual poem. it was a bit short i admit, but it was sweet all the same and very enjoyable!
4xXTheRealSlimBabbii7Xxthat was good :) i liked how you tied the title into the actual poem. it was a bit short i admit, but it was sweet all the same and very enjoyable!
12/8/2003 c1 25Guenevere Lee
Holy shit that was good... Good use of repetition, words, emotions, ect, ect, it was really good!
I wonder if our Gods ever think that about us...
But yeah, absolutely amazing.
-LS
25Guenevere LeeHoly shit that was good... Good use of repetition, words, emotions, ect, ect, it was really good!
I wonder if our Gods ever think that about us...
But yeah, absolutely amazing.
-LS
10/17/2003 c1 12IHJ
A nice motif with "I created you; I molded you". It ended somewhat abruptly to me, but I suppose that was to complement the title of "Blood, Sweat and Tears", eh? But...I still feel it could MORE, like there could be more you could tell to the characters you created, more of the struggle and strife you had to go through to make them believeable and loved (or hated). Hm, I reckon it's just me.
A good poem, unique in its idea.
-Izzy J.
12IHJA nice motif with "I created you; I molded you". It ended somewhat abruptly to me, but I suppose that was to complement the title of "Blood, Sweat and Tears", eh? But...I still feel it could MORE, like there could be more you could tell to the characters you created, more of the struggle and strife you had to go through to make them believeable and loved (or hated). Hm, I reckon it's just me.
A good poem, unique in its idea.
-Izzy J.