for Walking in the Rain10/19/2003 c1 
21Crystal Snowflakes
ah, I love the rain. Rain gives inspiration...The only question is why is there only three lines on the fourth stanza?
And I hope this doesn't sound harsh, but the last stanza was sorta out of place. But nonetheless, great job! Loved it ^^
21Crystal Snowflakesah, I love the rain. Rain gives inspiration...The only question is why is there only three lines on the fourth stanza?
And I hope this doesn't sound harsh, but the last stanza was sorta out of place. But nonetheless, great job! Loved it ^^
10/17/2003 c1 47Anjeni Windsinger
I love walking in the rain. Problem is, it doesn't rain that hard. Parents call me weird for doing that, hehe.
Anyways, very nice work. Really well done. Keep writing!
47Anjeni WindsingerI love walking in the rain. Problem is, it doesn't rain that hard. Parents call me weird for doing that, hehe.
Anyways, very nice work. Really well done. Keep writing!
10/17/2003 c1 23suckerplucker
I like this alot, the desolation that walking alone in the rain can inspire is really well portrayed, the one thing thats skeeving me out is the abnormal 4th stanza (why only 3 lines?)
otherwise, im a fan
zac
23suckerpluckerI like this alot, the desolation that walking alone in the rain can inspire is really well portrayed, the one thing thats skeeving me out is the abnormal 4th stanza (why only 3 lines?)
otherwise, im a fan
zac
10/17/2003 c1 Me
It's a lovely poem... and sad... though the ending's like... -_-"
Anyways... don't want in the rain next time... getting all wet and stuff... it feels nice... but you'll get a cold...
Anyways... good job!
It's a lovely poem... and sad... though the ending's like... -_-"
Anyways... don't want in the rain next time... getting all wet and stuff... it feels nice... but you'll get a cold...
Anyways... good job!