for Unseen11/12/2003 c1 
22Non-existent Puritanism
Wow. Great imagery. I could really envision it. I don't know what you're fighting, but I really like this story nonetheless.
22Non-existent PuritanismWow. Great imagery. I could really envision it. I don't know what you're fighting, but I really like this story nonetheless.
10/18/2003 c1 Thursday's Suicide
That was amazing! I love it! What I could say though, the ending is good but you could possibly add more to the ending, when read, you get all ready for something big to happen, but you explain what it is. Great poem!
That was amazing! I love it! What I could say though, the ending is good but you could possibly add more to the ending, when read, you get all ready for something big to happen, but you explain what it is. Great poem!
10/18/2003 c1 52Enter The Coil
Not bad, not bad. It was a little choppy i think when i was reading, but i still think its pretty good.
52Enter The CoilNot bad, not bad. It was a little choppy i think when i was reading, but i still think its pretty good.