for My Locker Ate My Homework!5/13/2004 c1 
4JoseJavi
its very funny. i really enjoyed it. check out my poems, please. they are extremely crappy, though. Keep it up!
4JoseJaviits very funny. i really enjoyed it. check out my poems, please. they are extremely crappy, though. Keep it up!
11/23/2003 c1 144Infinite Smiles
Heylo!- I like it. Very funny. I like how it flows like a story. Good job. Very imaginative.
144Infinite SmilesHeylo!- I like it. Very funny. I like how it flows like a story. Good job. Very imaginative.
11/23/2003 c1 14Jugge
Hehe, first comedy poem I have read at Fictionpress. It was great :) Funny and good. Thumbs up!
14JuggeHehe, first comedy poem I have read at Fictionpress. It was great :) Funny and good. Thumbs up!
10/20/2003 c1 27E. M. Grinlord
Very clever. And funny. I thought it was great. The stuff mostly rhymed. (Please read my poems. Please!) Yeah. Your poem was funny.
27E. M. GrinlordVery clever. And funny. I thought it was great. The stuff mostly rhymed. (Please read my poems. Please!) Yeah. Your poem was funny.
10/19/2003 c1 Sana
He He. I liked that. The rythym (sp?) didn't always flow, but it sounded great, anyway. By the way, is that story true?
-Sana
He He. I liked that. The rythym (sp?) didn't always flow, but it sounded great, anyway. By the way, is that story true?
-Sana
10/18/2003 c1 2FullofEmptiness
HAHAHA! That's pretty funny. I liked the in and out of rhyme, it worked well. I also liked the school imagery that it conveyed, very well done, and the humor was excellent.
2FullofEmptinessHAHAHA! That's pretty funny. I liked the in and out of rhyme, it worked well. I also liked the school imagery that it conveyed, very well done, and the humor was excellent.