
7/28/2004 c1
2a-person-01
Oh my gosh. That was so good! Thanks for the kind reviews! I really appreciated it! But this story was so fantastic. What a sick, sick mind that old lady has! OMG I can't believe how good this is! This is going on my favorites list!

Oh my gosh. That was so good! Thanks for the kind reviews! I really appreciated it! But this story was so fantastic. What a sick, sick mind that old lady has! OMG I can't believe how good this is! This is going on my favorites list!
5/18/2004 c1
22slave to the voices
That was beautiful! I love Granny. Your description flows well without being too wordy, it's perfect. Awesome little story. Thanks for sharing it. Keep writing!
**Slave**

That was beautiful! I love Granny. Your description flows well without being too wordy, it's perfect. Awesome little story. Thanks for sharing it. Keep writing!
**Slave**
2/24/2004 c1 Agathy
OMG...I was looking through the Thriller section (which is only 24 pages long, sadly) and the summary caught my attention. The title is so ironic, it cracks me up. =) But I really enjoyed this, even though it was macabre and disturbing and I hope there aren't that many creepy little old women like that out there...anyway, your writing style is concise and very clean...anyway, keep writing- this was awesome!
OMG...I was looking through the Thriller section (which is only 24 pages long, sadly) and the summary caught my attention. The title is so ironic, it cracks me up. =) But I really enjoyed this, even though it was macabre and disturbing and I hope there aren't that many creepy little old women like that out there...anyway, your writing style is concise and very clean...anyway, keep writing- this was awesome!
1/31/2004 c1 ChristianGeekGuy
Wow. Frightening. Well written. The only thing I would reccomend is to add a sentence or two describing the park.
Wow. Frightening. Well written. The only thing I would reccomend is to add a sentence or two describing the park.
1/14/2004 c1
100Devious Angel XDemon
Hahahaha! I am going to be one of them old people who trip kids with my walkin stick. Great job. ::thumbs up::

Hahahaha! I am going to be one of them old people who trip kids with my walkin stick. Great job. ::thumbs up::
1/12/2004 c1
8Raven Oghma
Beautiful! I love it! EEp... I'm sorry I haven't much to say... I'm too busy reeling in delight...

Beautiful! I love it! EEp... I'm sorry I haven't much to say... I'm too busy reeling in delight...
1/3/2004 c1
5aqua-angel
O.O OH MY FREAKIN FUDGICLES! THAT WAS SO UNEXPECTED AND I"M STILL SITTING HERE WITH MY MOUTH OPEN XD AH that was so twistedly creepy XD ew bad granny! bad granny!

O.O OH MY FREAKIN FUDGICLES! THAT WAS SO UNEXPECTED AND I"M STILL SITTING HERE WITH MY MOUTH OPEN XD AH that was so twistedly creepy XD ew bad granny! bad granny!
11/30/2003 c1 VAL
Very disturbing. I like it. ^_^
Very disturbing. I like it. ^_^
11/16/2003 c1
7King-of-the-Carpet-People
Hm...I have to say that that story was deeply disturbing. I'll never be able to visit my grandmother again without a deep sense of foreboding. Very well written, in any case.

Hm...I have to say that that story was deeply disturbing. I'll never be able to visit my grandmother again without a deep sense of foreboding. Very well written, in any case.
11/8/2003 c1
14Kymik
Hi! Thanks for reviewing my stuff, I really appreciated it... hopefully I'll be adding real soon.
I've read a few of your stories and so far, I really like them. Their short, but always entertaining and well-written. Admittedly, they are a little twisted (especially the muderous grandma), but that's my favourite kind of story. I love it when something turns out to be different than what it seems, in my opinion, that's what makes a story great.
Cheers :)

Hi! Thanks for reviewing my stuff, I really appreciated it... hopefully I'll be adding real soon.
I've read a few of your stories and so far, I really like them. Their short, but always entertaining and well-written. Admittedly, they are a little twisted (especially the muderous grandma), but that's my favourite kind of story. I love it when something turns out to be different than what it seems, in my opinion, that's what makes a story great.
Cheers :)
10/21/2003 c1
7RainingRoses
The story was great. Only one thing bothered me. It would have been terribly difficult for others not to have witnessed any of a long chain of events. perhaps when you set the stage you should include that they were in a very secluded area of the park surrounded by bushes unseen by the other park visitors. Also you may want to give the parents something to do other than talk to another couple. It is rare that parents lose track of their children for that long. Other than that, it was fantastic. I found myslef genuinely gasping in disbelief and horror when she attacked. Great job.

The story was great. Only one thing bothered me. It would have been terribly difficult for others not to have witnessed any of a long chain of events. perhaps when you set the stage you should include that they were in a very secluded area of the park surrounded by bushes unseen by the other park visitors. Also you may want to give the parents something to do other than talk to another couple. It is rare that parents lose track of their children for that long. Other than that, it was fantastic. I found myslef genuinely gasping in disbelief and horror when she attacked. Great job.
10/19/2003 c1
17Timberly Rey
Very, very interesting. I'm glad my grandma doesn't knit. ;) Thanks for all the nice reviews. Tengo un tia que toca la guitarra is spanish for "I have an aunt who plays the guitar" It somehow corresponds to an English phrase which I've never heard of before: "What does that have to do with the price of eggs in China?" I was online one day looking for something, and that struck me funny

Very, very interesting. I'm glad my grandma doesn't knit. ;) Thanks for all the nice reviews. Tengo un tia que toca la guitarra is spanish for "I have an aunt who plays the guitar" It somehow corresponds to an English phrase which I've never heard of before: "What does that have to do with the price of eggs in China?" I was online one day looking for something, and that struck me funny