for The Game III11/21/2003 c2 
87EchoesOfReason
First I AM OUTRAGED that I didn't get the author alert for the prologue of my FAVOURITE story. -grumbles something barely audible about fictionpress- Second I AM HYPER AND HAPPY that you decided to continue the series -does a happy dance and wakes up the house- If that Normak ever comes back, ooh he better hope he can come back to life more than once because I'LL KILL HIM! Yes well, great TWO chapters. Even though the prologue was short, it was still AMAZING and the first chapter couldn't have been any better unless that DUMBASS Normak came back, which I seriously doubt he will any time soon.
Well aside from my ranting on how stupid that boy, yes I said boy, Normak, is, because he is and we all know that! This is great and I'm just so HAPPY that you continued. So keep it up, this great work and your amazing writing style and this WICKED ass plot line.
Love always,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness
87EchoesOfReasonFirst I AM OUTRAGED that I didn't get the author alert for the prologue of my FAVOURITE story. -grumbles something barely audible about fictionpress- Second I AM HYPER AND HAPPY that you decided to continue the series -does a happy dance and wakes up the house- If that Normak ever comes back, ooh he better hope he can come back to life more than once because I'LL KILL HIM! Yes well, great TWO chapters. Even though the prologue was short, it was still AMAZING and the first chapter couldn't have been any better unless that DUMBASS Normak came back, which I seriously doubt he will any time soon.
Well aside from my ranting on how stupid that boy, yes I said boy, Normak, is, because he is and we all know that! This is great and I'm just so HAPPY that you continued. So keep it up, this great work and your amazing writing style and this WICKED ass plot line.
Love always,
A-Light-From-Your-Darkness
11/21/2003 c2 32Cryptic Insanity
Oh my lord! I didn't even get that darn email saying you made another story! Another Game! YAY! Now, it's a trilogy! Wo
I can't wait to see how it developes ^^
32Cryptic InsanityOh my lord! I didn't even get that darn email saying you made another story! Another Game! YAY! Now, it's a trilogy! Wo
I can't wait to see how it developes ^^
11/14/2003 c1 Write Me Thrilled
great awsome, please write ther rest I loved the first two and i wanna know what happens at the end.
great awsome, please write ther rest I loved the first two and i wanna know what happens at the end.
11/7/2003 c1 Here In My Mind
Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!
I'm so happy you chose to right another story on The Game! ^.^
One question though. WHERE THE HELL IS NORMRAK? T_T Lol. He better have a good excuse for leaving Raina and not being there when his first son was born.
Great prologue! I can't wait until the next chappie.
Till next time, Buhbye ^_~
Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!
I'm so happy you chose to right another story on The Game! ^.^
One question though. WHERE THE HELL IS NORMRAK? T_T Lol. He better have a good excuse for leaving Raina and not being there when his first son was born.
Great prologue! I can't wait until the next chappie.
Till next time, Buhbye ^_~
10/26/2003 c1 Midnights Sorrow
I seriously think RAINA Should be fighting harder to be a stronger person to protect her son and her self. I think she should try to stop thinking about Normrak for a while and grow up! I love Raina and Normrak together, really I do. I just wished Normrak would understand what he is putting Raina through and so he deserves Raina leaving him for A while! Love the new story already! MORE!
I seriously think RAINA Should be fighting harder to be a stronger person to protect her son and her self. I think she should try to stop thinking about Normrak for a while and grow up! I love Raina and Normrak together, really I do. I just wished Normrak would understand what he is putting Raina through and so he deserves Raina leaving him for A while! Love the new story already! MORE!
10/25/2003 c1 salad dayz
haha you're back!i'm glad you decided to continue this story.normrak,what happen to him?why did he abandon her wife and son?hope he'll come home soon.
you're the best.
haha you're back!i'm glad you decided to continue this story.normrak,what happen to him?why did he abandon her wife and son?hope he'll come home soon.
you're the best.
10/24/2003 c1 krazy cutie chic
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trilogynes!
haha, update soon, and i cant believe norkmarak left, it isnt her fault she got pregnant haha, i hope you update soon, :)
mich
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trilogynes!
haha, update soon, and i cant believe norkmarak left, it isnt her fault she got pregnant haha, i hope you update soon, :)
mich
10/24/2003 c1 16Mannie
ew...heartless bastard...um i actually kinda liked Normrak...wouldnt mind having one like him except for his constant attitude...blah...go ahead and update..yall do good i bet..until then.
16Mannieew...heartless bastard...um i actually kinda liked Normrak...wouldnt mind having one like him except for his constant attitude...blah...go ahead and update..yall do good i bet..until then.
10/23/2003 c1 Pyrope
Hey! Ur back! I'm glad that nobody's dead so far in the story. But where oh where is Normrak? He just missed the birth of his son! Bad Normrak. Well I'm sure he'll be making an appearence like he always does, out of no where.. I don't mind that you haven't updated. You had to come up with ideas and plots etc. I'm surprised you updated this early! I'm positive that this story will be just as great as the last two. Can't wait for the next chapter and the baby's name? Normrak will come back! he will he will he will!
Hey! Ur back! I'm glad that nobody's dead so far in the story. But where oh where is Normrak? He just missed the birth of his son! Bad Normrak. Well I'm sure he'll be making an appearence like he always does, out of no where.. I don't mind that you haven't updated. You had to come up with ideas and plots etc. I'm surprised you updated this early! I'm positive that this story will be just as great as the last two. Can't wait for the next chapter and the baby's name? Normrak will come back! he will he will he will!
10/23/2003 c1 Pyrope
Hey! Ur back! I'm glad that nobody's dead so far in the story. But where oh where is Normrak? He just missed the birth of his son! Bad Normrak. Well I'm sure he'll be making an appearence like he always does, out of no where.. I don't mind that you haven't updated. You had to come up with ideas and plots etc. I'm surprised you updated this early! I'm positive that this story will be just as great as the last two. Can't wait for the next chapter and the baby's name? Normrak will come back! he will he will he will!
Hey! Ur back! I'm glad that nobody's dead so far in the story. But where oh where is Normrak? He just missed the birth of his son! Bad Normrak. Well I'm sure he'll be making an appearence like he always does, out of no where.. I don't mind that you haven't updated. You had to come up with ideas and plots etc. I'm surprised you updated this early! I'm positive that this story will be just as great as the last two. Can't wait for the next chapter and the baby's name? Normrak will come back! he will he will he will!
10/20/2003 c1 ski1118
oh... my... GOD! are you making a freaking trilogy? lol, it's cool. hopefully this will explain normrak's disappearance, yet again... *sigh* can i murder the guy? he's starting to piss me off with all this leaving and stuff. it's not right, especially considering she just had a child. i'm assuming he wasn't around at all during the pregnancy, now was he? hmm... not good, not good at all. well, can't wait for the first chapter to come out! this should be interesting, as always. lol. :o)
oh... my... GOD! are you making a freaking trilogy? lol, it's cool. hopefully this will explain normrak's disappearance, yet again... *sigh* can i murder the guy? he's starting to piss me off with all this leaving and stuff. it's not right, especially considering she just had a child. i'm assuming he wasn't around at all during the pregnancy, now was he? hmm... not good, not good at all. well, can't wait for the first chapter to come out! this should be interesting, as always. lol. :o)
10/20/2003 c1 Emerald
Finally! My computer is fixed! It's been on the fritz since i got back from band camp in august! ugh It deleted all the emails i've gotten since then too! gr *glares at the evil possessed computer* Then when i finally was able to get back on without it messing up on me and u weren't on fictionpress at that time and i couldn't remember ur e-mail. It was horrible too i mean i was left without the epilogue to the game 2! *the crowd gasps in horror* Which by the way is great except for the whole thing with Normrak again. Goodness sakes, how many times is he gonna run away? I miss him being in the story lol i mean come on it's normrak! *sigh* oh well i'm so glad that u started the game 3! *bounces up and down while the crowd cheers* and there's a miny normrak now! how cute! does the lil one have a name out of all curiousity or is he gonna be nameless? j/k atleast i'd hope he is gonna have a name. Well neways i missed being able to read ur stories!But now that i can i can't wait for the next chap. ttyl
*~Emerald~*
Finally! My computer is fixed! It's been on the fritz since i got back from band camp in august! ugh It deleted all the emails i've gotten since then too! gr *glares at the evil possessed computer* Then when i finally was able to get back on without it messing up on me and u weren't on fictionpress at that time and i couldn't remember ur e-mail. It was horrible too i mean i was left without the epilogue to the game 2! *the crowd gasps in horror* Which by the way is great except for the whole thing with Normrak again. Goodness sakes, how many times is he gonna run away? I miss him being in the story lol i mean come on it's normrak! *sigh* oh well i'm so glad that u started the game 3! *bounces up and down while the crowd cheers* and there's a miny normrak now! how cute! does the lil one have a name out of all curiousity or is he gonna be nameless? j/k atleast i'd hope he is gonna have a name. Well neways i missed being able to read ur stories!But now that i can i can't wait for the next chap. ttyl
*~Emerald~*
10/20/2003 c1 JazzeeT
hehe ur back.. i love this seris.. he needs to get some sense in his head and find his ass back home... lol.. update soon.. hooked as always
hehe ur back.. i love this seris.. he needs to get some sense in his head and find his ass back home... lol.. update soon.. hooked as always