
11/24/2005 c1
25MacNWoody
lol, its so cute! It does sound like a 6 year old and those kinda adventures. Great job!

lol, its so cute! It does sound like a 6 year old and those kinda adventures. Great job!
6/20/2004 c1
45rhyne
Aww! This story is terribly cute! Very nice... It sounded just like a six-year-old telling it too. ^^

Aww! This story is terribly cute! Very nice... It sounded just like a six-year-old telling it too. ^^
1/31/2004 c1 Spasmodic Rice
Lol... nice and random. Just the way I like it. =D Scrub Girl was very amusing (and sneaky to boot!), and the story itself was original. Loved it!
~Blizz
Lol... nice and random. Just the way I like it. =D Scrub Girl was very amusing (and sneaky to boot!), and the story itself was original. Loved it!
~Blizz
1/26/2004 c1
3Long Live the Losers
This was cute and funny - I liked it quite a bit. I would go ahead and knock Scrub Girl's age up to eight, as she feels like she's more that age than six. I can see this playing out as a great short cartoon, though.

This was cute and funny - I liked it quite a bit. I would go ahead and knock Scrub Girl's age up to eight, as she feels like she's more that age than six. I can see this playing out as a great short cartoon, though.
10/29/2003 c1 TigHan
Too lazy to sign in, sorry. that was short and sweet, except it was a little confusing. you never really said how old scrub girl was. but other than that it was really good... you captured the thoughts of her really well.
Too lazy to sign in, sorry. that was short and sweet, except it was a little confusing. you never really said how old scrub girl was. but other than that it was really good... you captured the thoughts of her really well.