
12/29/2005 c1
32dystynctlidotti
That's a beautiful poem... it made almost want to cry. I love the bits at the beginning and the end. And the middle.

That's a beautiful poem... it made almost want to cry. I love the bits at the beginning and the end. And the middle.
1/22/2004 c1
15Devi Lethe
I enjoyed this very much. I wish you luck because I empathize with your situation.

I enjoyed this very much. I wish you luck because I empathize with your situation.
10/20/2003 c1 natejames
Your style of freeverse amazes me. You are a poet among poets. The story is enticing, I just want to keep reading it. . .if there were only more.
Your style of freeverse amazes me. You are a poet among poets. The story is enticing, I just want to keep reading it. . .if there were only more.