for Saying Good-bye to Laura9/30/2005 c1 Kissless Goodbye
I was sceptical, I admit. The beginning had me thinking this was poorly written but then the end made up for it. It was sad, I didn't cry which is wierd cause i always do, but it was good the end.
I think, in my oppinion only, the beginning needs work. But no matter, its good!
Kepp writing. x
I was sceptical, I admit. The beginning had me thinking this was poorly written but then the end made up for it. It was sad, I didn't cry which is wierd cause i always do, but it was good the end.
I think, in my oppinion only, the beginning needs work. But no matter, its good!
Kepp writing. x
1/7/2001 c1 Rebecca
Captured it nearly perfect.
almost had the pain in the story that i felt when my best friend died.
Captured it nearly perfect.
almost had the pain in the story that i felt when my best friend died.
12/16/2000 c1 Himeko
*trying to hold back her tears* that was beautiful...truly beautiful masako...
*trying to hold back her tears* that was beautiful...truly beautiful masako...
12/16/2000 c1 Shino TenshiKitty
*cries* oh my goddess! Masako perfect 10! again! :_:! Keep writing like this! *runs off crying*
*cries* oh my goddess! Masako perfect 10! again! :_:! Keep writing like this! *runs off crying*
12/16/2000 c1 Rage Neko
that was too sad.. i mean that. i dunno if i can comment, it reminded me too much of my sister. sorry.
that was too sad.. i mean that. i dunno if i can comment, it reminded me too much of my sister. sorry.
12/16/2000 c1 
37Lina Shankar
that's beautiful. i loved it, oneesan. *hugs* you always remember that i love you, and no matter how far apart we are, my soul will forever be entwined with yours, sister.
37Lina Shankarthat's beautiful. i loved it, oneesan. *hugs* you always remember that i love you, and no matter how far apart we are, my soul will forever be entwined with yours, sister.
12/16/2000 c1 Ayisha
Good.Made me sad,but good anyway...
Good.Made me sad,but good anyway...
12/16/2000 c1 Zoryana
This story was so sad, but i really liked it. You had a lot of similies and i also like that. I think that this story should be part of a larger one, if it already isnt. You are a great writer
This story was so sad, but i really liked it. You had a lot of similies and i also like that. I think that this story should be part of a larger one, if it already isnt. You are a great writer
12/16/2000 c1 Hippy
Wow! That was great! Really sad though :'(
Wow! That was great! Really sad though :'(