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11/21/2003 c1 80Plato's Optic Runaway
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Ah, and you praise me so endlessly? Your simple mastery of the human language is manifested so simply here, and I almost want to cry...

Curse you if you ever stop writing.
11/16/2003 c1 6glass-of-water
Wow! Very descriptive and nice storyline. I like the way you linked the ending back to the beginning like a loop.
11/5/2003 c1 72Magnificent Moi
Lovely. Beautifully descriptive, and something I very much need to do right now...love myself. Everyone should. Love the way you wrote in the memories. Will there be more?

xo-Em
10/22/2003 c1 7She's a Star
Oh, I liked this. Very simple and sharp, and your characterization was nice. You painted a very vivid picture of the main character. I like 'Is she brave? Most say she is foolish.'

And as for 'she studied more than she breathed'? I can so relate at the moment. School is going to kill me. It's just that simple.

Gah.

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