for Lipstick11/21/2003 c1 
80Plato's Optic Runaway
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Ah, and you praise me so endlessly? Your simple mastery of the human language is manifested so simply here, and I almost want to cry...
Curse you if you ever stop writing.
80Plato's Optic Runaway...
Ah, and you praise me so endlessly? Your simple mastery of the human language is manifested so simply here, and I almost want to cry...
Curse you if you ever stop writing.
11/16/2003 c1 6glass-of-water
Wow! Very descriptive and nice storyline. I like the way you linked the ending back to the beginning like a loop.
6glass-of-waterWow! Very descriptive and nice storyline. I like the way you linked the ending back to the beginning like a loop.
11/5/2003 c1 72Magnificent Moi
Lovely. Beautifully descriptive, and something I very much need to do right now...love myself. Everyone should. Love the way you wrote in the memories. Will there be more?
xo-Em
72Magnificent MoiLovely. Beautifully descriptive, and something I very much need to do right now...love myself. Everyone should. Love the way you wrote in the memories. Will there be more?
xo-Em
10/22/2003 c1 7She's a Star
Oh, I liked this. Very simple and sharp, and your characterization was nice. You painted a very vivid picture of the main character. I like 'Is she brave? Most say she is foolish.'
And as for 'she studied more than she breathed'? I can so relate at the moment. School is going to kill me. It's just that simple.
Gah.
7She's a StarOh, I liked this. Very simple and sharp, and your characterization was nice. You painted a very vivid picture of the main character. I like 'Is she brave? Most say she is foolish.'
And as for 'she studied more than she breathed'? I can so relate at the moment. School is going to kill me. It's just that simple.
Gah.