for Future of Myself10/24/2003 c1 
3shamless hate
I hate that you beat your self up over this still. It was a mistake anr you are human, an extraordinary one, but still human. Mistakes are how we learn. The poem is beautifull and erie i love it it shows a part of your soal. luv ya
3shamless hateI hate that you beat your self up over this still. It was a mistake anr you are human, an extraordinary one, but still human. Mistakes are how we learn. The poem is beautifull and erie i love it it shows a part of your soal. luv ya
10/20/2003 c1 53emrldeyedragon
This is a pretty good poem. A different rhyme scheme might complete it a little better but overall it's very good! :)
53emrldeyedragonThis is a pretty good poem. A different rhyme scheme might complete it a little better but overall it's very good! :)