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8/11/2004 c1 mizutenchi22
Beautiful! It doesn't NEED to be in "poetry format". The way it is written makes it FEEL like I am actually at the ocean. Longer sentences give the impression of time; the ocean is like a clock. It is always ebbing and flowing. This is great! Don't be fooled by the idea that you have to be in a "certain format". Come up with your own ideas! Great job!
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10/22/2003 c1 Needa S
Bravo... Excellent work!

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