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4/14/2004 c1 79CrimsonCat
Okay, time for me to catch up on my reviews...
This poem felt.. familiar. Soemthing about it that I can't quite put my finger on. As if I have lived within these words. I loved lines 3-6. And I love where you chose to break off the lines, and the stanzas. You're always so creative about that. And it always works so well.
"and after a while they are only sounds behind you"
amazing.
11/30/2003 c1 AVIGON
It's been a while since your last author alert found its way to my mail box, so I'm hoping that this little note might prompt you to post more, as I have to admit that I've become a bit of a jaclyn junkie. I need a fix, and I need it now. Which brings me here, browsing through your stuff yet again... I hope this time I find the words I'm looking for.
The conjunctions and subjunctions, and sometimes the lack thereof, really work. It makes me feel as if there's no rhyme or reason, as if the world's downside up. I like some of your other poems better, but this one has a certain quality to it that I just cannot deny. It's a bit like "love" I guess... You never know why you love, because there's no logic to it.
10/22/2003 c1 13kirsten was
I love your titles. They're all so creative.

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