10/25/2005 c17 Darwin ruler of all
This story isn't finished! You haven't updated in AGES, it says, but it isn't finished! Feel my woe.

It's a brilliant story, I love the sidhe culture that you have fabricated / expanded upon / found out about. The characters are all really interesting - I particularly like Dwyn.

My only real negative comments - apart from the lack of finish-ment - is the fact that the story appears to revolve around sex. Don't get me wrong, I like lemon as much as anyone and you right it really well, but there seems to be a lot of writing in each chapter compared to the amount of plot going on.

Also, the fact is that maybe you should have separated out the two different stories a bit - it started out with the focus being on the woes of Dwyn and his lost memory and effed up love life, and while you've kept up that focus, the plot has turned from helping Dwyn sort himself out to helping Tristan save the world. I like both plots equally well, and the change was fluid enough to work, but it might have worked better if you turned the second half into a sequel, as you would have had some resolution, a point to move on from. I don't write much myself, but I always found it easier to progress from a point of rest than from on ongoing trail of storyline.

Well, those are my thoughts. I hope they aren't taken as being harsh - I really did enjoy the story heaps. The above points weren't real problems, they were just things that ocurred to me when writing this review.

I don't suppose an update would be offerable? Just for me?

7/1/2005 c17 Lutetia
finish it. now. now.

5/12/2005 c1 optimouse
I like the story that you have been writing, and your style! Lady above! You're good. I can only dream that I one day reach such skill. Thank You for giving me the chance to read it. Oh, and a bit of critique; perhaps you could lessen the side stories, they're distracting.-Kat

7/30/2004 c17 3alittlepilot
oh my god. i love everyone. im obsessed. oisin & jin & tris are glorious and i was in love with them right from the start. and now dwyn & keir. ah... beautiful. exciting. i laugh and cry and worry and lust and am dying to know what happens next. yep. it's decided. you're amazing.
sunshine

5/12/2004 c17 shizukashin
Oh god I love this story! I really want some more of the main story though *pouts* I love kitsunes! Yum! ^_^ meh. You rock! Keep writing! ^_^

4/12/2004 c17 technodragon78
Very good story. The fact that it kept my interest and is in first person(which I almost never read except for Laurel Hamilton)is really cool. Got lost a couple of times. But kept going. I will keep looking for update. May the muses be kind.

1/22/2004 c14 Kwirtay
I can't believe that for how deliciously wicked this story is, you somehow have less than a continent's worth of reviews! Now, I'm more of a lime person, but for some reason, the way this story is written maybe, it compells me to read. Wicked, evil stuff, this is. Far too addictive...