11/9/2019 c9 Guest
I hope you continue this story someday, I will be waiting, that's for sure... :)
I hope you continue this story someday, I will be waiting, that's for sure... :)
12/15/2016 c5 Guest
I know this story is old but I wanted to say something... the beginning was captivating but afterwards it just seemed like you were writing a draft or something. It felt like two different people were writing it because the story started jumping all over the place, like you had a good idea but you didn't expect to run out of fuel for it so fast. I don't know, but it would have been great to have read more.
I know this story is old but I wanted to say something... the beginning was captivating but afterwards it just seemed like you were writing a draft or something. It felt like two different people were writing it because the story started jumping all over the place, like you had a good idea but you didn't expect to run out of fuel for it so fast. I don't know, but it would have been great to have read more.
5/31/2015 c9 Silver
I love your writing. I truly do. I enjoyed False Facades, Through Me, and this story. But its not finished! I really want to know what happens; you're a gifted writer and your writing just pulls me in. I can't stop reading and it's really disappointing to find out that this story isn't finished. I understand if it has anything to do with plagiarism but if it doesn't, could you consider starting this story up again? Please? Thank you. Thanks for writing and giving me so much enjoyment when I read your works.
I love your writing. I truly do. I enjoyed False Facades, Through Me, and this story. But its not finished! I really want to know what happens; you're a gifted writer and your writing just pulls me in. I can't stop reading and it's really disappointing to find out that this story isn't finished. I understand if it has anything to do with plagiarism but if it doesn't, could you consider starting this story up again? Please? Thank you. Thanks for writing and giving me so much enjoyment when I read your works.
8/7/2014 c9 Edu
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO NO NO! Does it end here? please please PU-LEASE! you gotta finish it
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO NO NO! Does it end here? please please PU-LEASE! you gotta finish it
4/28/2014 c9 Faerille
You have some Unfinished Business to take care of, Maeven. Literally. Please complete this fic! D': MY BRAIN IS CRYING BECAUSE IT WANTS TO FINISH THE STORY,
You're a great writer, I really do hope that you will be able to complete this fic!
You have some Unfinished Business to take care of, Maeven. Literally. Please complete this fic! D': MY BRAIN IS CRYING BECAUSE IT WANTS TO FINISH THE STORY,
You're a great writer, I really do hope that you will be able to complete this fic!
1/13/2014 c9 MaddieD96
Oh come on! pleeeaaaase don't just disappear pleeeaaaase Im dying here I must read more!
Oh come on! pleeeaaaase don't just disappear pleeeaaaase Im dying here I must read more!
12/14/2013 c9 Anon
I was hoping you would finish this one. :(
I was hoping you would finish this one. :(
11/16/2013 c9 Ms.Goode
Your stories are amazing and i can only wish you will update :) x
Your stories are amazing and i can only wish you will update :) x
10/15/2013 c9 Dominique Diane
OMFG please, I beg you to continue! This story is so awesome and you have amazing writing skills!
OMFG please, I beg you to continue! This story is so awesome and you have amazing writing skills!
7/25/2013 c9 Ju
WHY
THIS UNFINISHED!
is it Because it's called Unfinished business that this Story is unfinished!
unbelievable! please Continue pretty please!
WHY
THIS UNFINISHED!
is it Because it's called Unfinished business that this Story is unfinished!
unbelievable! please Continue pretty please!