for untitled6/8/2006 c5 
34mylittlechangingtruths
i likey this story! keep writing it! your writinf style is interesting, though be careful about littlr grammar mistakes..
34mylittlechangingtruthsi likey this story! keep writing it! your writinf style is interesting, though be careful about littlr grammar mistakes..
12/17/2003 c5 jeff chin
interesting how the narrator has finely tuned senses that detect the smallest details. maybe it's just me or maybe i missed something but i don't get the ending.
interesting how the narrator has finely tuned senses that detect the smallest details. maybe it's just me or maybe i missed something but i don't get the ending.
11/29/2003 c5 28Rionarayne
XD! I love this one! You should SO continue! I got a really good visual from the last chapter, you use description really well. PLEASE keep this one up... for me?
Love ya bunches,
Rionarayne
28RionarayneXD! I love this one! You should SO continue! I got a really good visual from the last chapter, you use description really well. PLEASE keep this one up... for me?
Love ya bunches,
Rionarayne
11/19/2003 c4 11mrs.shigwa.cobain
gah, shortness! and i really wanna know the gender, it's bugging me cuz i can't have a mental picture! ah well, but that chapter was a tease, they need to be longer! ok i'll leave you alone now
11mrs.shigwa.cobaingah, shortness! and i really wanna know the gender, it's bugging me cuz i can't have a mental picture! ah well, but that chapter was a tease, they need to be longer! ok i'll leave you alone now
10/28/2003 c1 1Meanie Bear
I didn't read it. SO don't bug me 'bout it.
Hm, I will change the Athena part. But Greek Myths are predictable- what lolly username?
1Meanie BearI didn't read it. SO don't bug me 'bout it.
Hm, I will change the Athena part. But Greek Myths are predictable- what lolly username?
10/28/2003 c3 11mrs.shigwa.cobain
ooh, that's interesting! Now I really wanna know if it's a boy or a girl. I'm assuming it's a guy tho from "ignoring all the dirty looks we were getting"
11mrs.shigwa.cobainooh, that's interesting! Now I really wanna know if it's a boy or a girl. I'm assuming it's a guy tho from "ignoring all the dirty looks we were getting"