for Even In Death I am alone8/6/2008 c1 
12Merovingian
"Every living thing dies alone." Get used to it, it's one of the only universal constants there actually are. Think about that for awhile. As for the poem, I am very sorry to tell you, but it was mediocre at best. I am not trying to be rude, I am being honest, so you can increase your ability to make people feel what you feel, not just read your words and think they know what you are talking about. Hope you have a nice day.
12Merovingian"Every living thing dies alone." Get used to it, it's one of the only universal constants there actually are. Think about that for awhile. As for the poem, I am very sorry to tell you, but it was mediocre at best. I am not trying to be rude, I am being honest, so you can increase your ability to make people feel what you feel, not just read your words and think they know what you are talking about. Hope you have a nice day.
8/28/2005 c1 40T41N7
that's really sad. It kind of had a sort of hollowness to it. It was a very empty feeling poem. You did a great job conveying your emotions through this, and I admitt that that is how I fell most of the time too. Everyone likes me, yet I have no friends.
40T41N7that's really sad. It kind of had a sort of hollowness to it. It was a very empty feeling poem. You did a great job conveying your emotions through this, and I admitt that that is how I fell most of the time too. Everyone likes me, yet I have no friends.
2/20/2005 c1 8CutToHeal
Alareic,from one writer to another,
well done.
I'm not sure if you were aiming for simplicity, but if it was intended, then you reached your target well.
8CutToHealAlareic,from one writer to another,
well done.
I'm not sure if you were aiming for simplicity, but if it was intended, then you reached your target well.
10/29/2004 c1 Fire Walk with Me
The earlier topic: I was bored one night, so I started writing. As I wrote, I decided to write a single-chaptered fan-fiction-type story that's kind of like a precursor to The Third Day. I think it turned out rather well, and I wanted to share it with you, and I was hoping(if you like it), with your permission, that I could put it up.
E-mail me at , and I'll send it in.
By the way: I really like this poem. It really reminds me of the way I feel right now.
Keep writing!
The earlier topic: I was bored one night, so I started writing. As I wrote, I decided to write a single-chaptered fan-fiction-type story that's kind of like a precursor to The Third Day. I think it turned out rather well, and I wanted to share it with you, and I was hoping(if you like it), with your permission, that I could put it up.
E-mail me at , and I'll send it in.
By the way: I really like this poem. It really reminds me of the way I feel right now.
Keep writing!
6/26/2004 c1 12SkyeWolf25
Yesh. . .this is sad, but, very well written poem. You defently had the lyrical sense going here, but its still sad. Very nice work, you defently got me a crying!
12SkyeWolf25Yesh. . .this is sad, but, very well written poem. You defently had the lyrical sense going here, but its still sad. Very nice work, you defently got me a crying!
2/18/2004 c1 daynaflame
Wonderful poem! ^_^ I admire people who can write good poetry like this! ^_^
Winter Dream ^_~
Wonderful poem! ^_^ I admire people who can write good poetry like this! ^_^
Winter Dream ^_~
10/27/2003 c1 Thursday's Suicide
it's good...ya`see I don't make poems rhyme all that much because poems express how people feel, sure you've got feeling and all beck but the rhyming just bothers me. ^_^ Your a good writer though, review my things too!
it's good...ya`see I don't make poems rhyme all that much because poems express how people feel, sure you've got feeling and all beck but the rhyming just bothers me. ^_^ Your a good writer though, review my things too!