for Poem 310/26/2003 c1 Carleigh
I'm not 100% positive about this but I think this was about the person she settled for after she realized she couldn't have the person she wanted, well I feel really bad for the person she settled for, you're pretty cold for doing that to them. Its funny its been about two years and the writer still doesn't realize she can't have that person and that she should just give up.
I'm not 100% positive about this but I think this was about the person she settled for after she realized she couldn't have the person she wanted, well I feel really bad for the person she settled for, you're pretty cold for doing that to them. Its funny its been about two years and the writer still doesn't realize she can't have that person and that she should just give up.
10/24/2003 c1 
49recalcitrant
i dunno what happened wit that one, the first2 stanzas are about u liking someone and want to be able to make them happy while the 3rd is about nothing being able to take the relationship. if you make this kinda change u should do it more gradually instead at the beginning of a stanza. it makes it seem like its a random stanza that doesnt belong.
i think ur individual stanzas are good but it needs work on the whole
review some of my poems if u want (i suggest "vicious ambition" and "one small meaning" lemme know what you think.
peace
49recalcitranti dunno what happened wit that one, the first2 stanzas are about u liking someone and want to be able to make them happy while the 3rd is about nothing being able to take the relationship. if you make this kinda change u should do it more gradually instead at the beginning of a stanza. it makes it seem like its a random stanza that doesnt belong.
i think ur individual stanzas are good but it needs work on the whole
review some of my poems if u want (i suggest "vicious ambition" and "one small meaning" lemme know what you think.
peace