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12/9/2008 c1 1rapink93
wow that was so powerful! i loved it!
7/22/2008 c1 54Nausikaa
Wow, lots of tension in this poem. The last couple of lines really help to build up the suspense.
8/31/2004 c1 carbon
i'm stupified...i love it. it is so perfect. there's no way you could change anything else about it. you capture all the people who read your stuff and hold thier attention until you say what needs to be said...dont change!
4/28/2004 c1 16vixxy
wow. that's awesome. amazing. major kudos. you deserve a penguin.
11/17/2003 c1 3Enchantressofthestars
*Mysterious*, where'd u get the idea, it seems professional tho, like really professional. Ur a really good writer!
10/24/2003 c1 9reikamae
Wow. I really like this one. You are very good at pulling the reader in and holding onto their attention by describing so well... continue on and I'll check back on you. Great job.

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