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11/27/2003 c1 236mezzie
most of the things i love in life are blue so i hear where you're comin from...

the combination of these different pieces of imagery forms a nice whole. the last verse is my favourite. and i see what you mean about mellow; there is sadness attached, but this isn't fatalistic anger.

i would almost like to see this with a little less formality, less english proper language,

ex: "Blue, colour of water" or "Blue, colour of clear sky"
10/25/2003 c1 9killthememory
Once again, a great piece of work. It's very touching and easy to relate to, at least for me. Happy writings!

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