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6/2/2005 c26 
4Marged Hymffri
CLIFFIE ON THE LAST CHAPTER? @#$%%, that oughta be made illegal...(sorry, I don't like to swear.)
4Marged HymffriCLIFFIE ON THE LAST CHAPTER? @#$%%, that oughta be made illegal...(sorry, I don't like to swear.)
6/2/2005 c19 Marged Hymffri
Linda's REALLY starting to get to me now...if I wasn't so unsure, I'd swear she was a Taurus (they're usually pretty annoying; you can tell them a mile away from the way they act).
You wouldn't by any chance be familiar with the Jamestown Community College Campus Cafe, would you? Because the descriptions of the Campus Cafe in here sound an awful lot like the JCC Campus Cafe...
Linda's REALLY starting to get to me now...if I wasn't so unsure, I'd swear she was a Taurus (they're usually pretty annoying; you can tell them a mile away from the way they act).
You wouldn't by any chance be familiar with the Jamestown Community College Campus Cafe, would you? Because the descriptions of the Campus Cafe in here sound an awful lot like the JCC Campus Cafe...
5/26/2005 c13 caleb
aw, rats...criminal justice starts in 15 minutes! can't wait to finish this, by the way- you should really think about publication for your manda rider mysteries- i bet they'd go in a heartbeat!
aw, rats...criminal justice starts in 15 minutes! can't wait to finish this, by the way- you should really think about publication for your manda rider mysteries- i bet they'd go in a heartbeat!
5/26/2005 c9 Amanda Brainard
*Grimaces in disgust* I can't believe Linda...she's way too nosy for my liking.
*Grimaces in disgust* I can't believe Linda...she's way too nosy for my liking.
5/26/2005 c6 Amanda Brainard
Ha, I couldn't stop grinning at the little argument Manda and Michael had...reminds me of my 16-year-old brother who's always acting superior to me...
Ha, I couldn't stop grinning at the little argument Manda and Michael had...reminds me of my 16-year-old brother who's always acting superior to me...
5/25/2005 c1 Marged Hymffri
"Her high school experience had taught her that anyone who was too good-looking and popular had to be considered as a major jerk." I totally agree...
Sorry the review's a little late, I'm new...can't wait to finish it! I love your Manda Rider character; I can really connect with her.
"Her high school experience had taught her that anyone who was too good-looking and popular had to be considered as a major jerk." I totally agree...
Sorry the review's a little late, I'm new...can't wait to finish it! I love your Manda Rider character; I can really connect with her.
4/30/2005 c26 6Silver-Dragon5
I've finished. Its a really good story. You have a nack for this mystery writing. I love the depth and detail of this one. There was so many more suspects and witnesses who tie into the story very well. I especially liked the inclusion of Linda who made things interesting. However, I'm disappointed that we didn't find out what Michael's secret was! I'd love to know what was going on. I'll be keeping a close eye out for it in the next ones. And I'm still waiting for a mouth on mouth kiss between Michael and Manda! When will they get together?
Thanks for reading my story also.
~Silver
P.S- Just thought I'd let you know that I've added you to my favourite authors list!
6Silver-Dragon5I've finished. Its a really good story. You have a nack for this mystery writing. I love the depth and detail of this one. There was so many more suspects and witnesses who tie into the story very well. I especially liked the inclusion of Linda who made things interesting. However, I'm disappointed that we didn't find out what Michael's secret was! I'd love to know what was going on. I'll be keeping a close eye out for it in the next ones. And I'm still waiting for a mouth on mouth kiss between Michael and Manda! When will they get together?
Thanks for reading my story also.
~Silver
P.S- Just thought I'd let you know that I've added you to my favourite authors list!
4/30/2005 c23 Silver-Dragon5
Excellent twists! I get so hooked on your stories. I just have to keep reading them until I've finished them all! lol. You're an awesome storyteller.
~Silver
Excellent twists! I get so hooked on your stories. I just have to keep reading them until I've finished them all! lol. You're an awesome storyteller.
~Silver
4/30/2005 c15 Silver-Dragon5
That was a marvolous chapter! Absolutely loved it. I hope she's ok.
~Silver
That was a marvolous chapter! Absolutely loved it. I hope she's ok.
~Silver
4/30/2005 c14 Silver-Dragon5
Great! I'm enjoying the playfulness of both Linda and Damien. I like how both are after Michael and Manda and both Michael and Manda get possessive over each other but still don't do anything about their relationship. Its quite humerous. I hope something happens soon to get them together!
~Silver
Great! I'm enjoying the playfulness of both Linda and Damien. I like how both are after Michael and Manda and both Michael and Manda get possessive over each other but still don't do anything about their relationship. Its quite humerous. I hope something happens soon to get them together!
~Silver
4/28/2005 c11 Silver-Dragon5
That comment about how an A-student should be perfect at everything is so true! I hate that too. I get it sometimes and it just annoys me.
Back to the story- love it and I'm still reading. Thats for continuing to read mine!
~Silver
That comment about how an A-student should be perfect at everything is so true! I hate that too. I get it sometimes and it just annoys me.
Back to the story- love it and I'm still reading. Thats for continuing to read mine!
~Silver
4/27/2005 c1 Silver-Dragon5
i can't sign in cause I'm at school and the computers are slow and I'd be waiting forever. Just wanted to let you know that I'm reading your next story. I should print some off to read in class. lol.
Good work ~Silver
i can't sign in cause I'm at school and the computers are slow and I'd be waiting forever. Just wanted to let you know that I'm reading your next story. I should print some off to read in class. lol.
Good work ~Silver
2/27/2005 c26 aims80
I liked this story a lot, now have to read the third one...
I liked this story a lot, now have to read the third one...