for Manda Rider 2 : Partners In Crime8/12/2004 c26 
73aims80
I enjoyed this one as much as the first one so I should probably get round to reading the third one as soon as possible.
73aims80I enjoyed this one as much as the first one so I should probably get round to reading the third one as soon as possible.
4/12/2004 c26 8DidntCryOnce
Hehe, wonderful story! I still don't trust Linda...
When are Micheal and Manda going to get together? I think they'd make an awesome couple.
You're whole plot..and..everything is...wow...undescribable. This story and the one before it, "Friends and Enemies" I think it's called, are fabulous stories and I'll be sure to read the one you're currently writing!
But for now,
Steph
8DidntCryOnceHehe, wonderful story! I still don't trust Linda...
When are Micheal and Manda going to get together? I think they'd make an awesome couple.
You're whole plot..and..everything is...wow...undescribable. This story and the one before it, "Friends and Enemies" I think it's called, are fabulous stories and I'll be sure to read the one you're currently writing!
But for now,
Steph
4/12/2004 c17 DidntCryOnce
Dangit! They need to get together...I think THEY'd make a good couple. I don't trust Linda. Anyway, so far so good.
-Steph
Dangit! They need to get together...I think THEY'd make a good couple. I don't trust Linda. Anyway, so far so good.
-Steph
4/7/2004 c26 Silver Phoenix11
Wow! You're really great in creating plotlines. I don't know how you can come up with this. Linda is the most #$#$@# annoying person I've ever encountered! Argh! But I like the camaraderie between Manda and Michael. They are getting close now (not romantically yet anyhow), but nonetheless the attraction is there.. Sorry, but I'm just a sucker for romance.
Wow! You're really great in creating plotlines. I don't know how you can come up with this. Linda is the most #$#$@# annoying person I've ever encountered! Argh! But I like the camaraderie between Manda and Michael. They are getting close now (not romantically yet anyhow), but nonetheless the attraction is there.. Sorry, but I'm just a sucker for romance.
3/13/2004 c25 lostinscotland
oh, by the way (since i forgot this in my last review)...
MANDA CAN'T GO OUT WITH DAMIEN!
oh, by the way (since i forgot this in my last review)...
MANDA CAN'T GO OUT WITH DAMIEN!
3/13/2004 c26 lostinscotland
bwahaha, rodriguez is at it again! so how long till they finally catch him? three books? five? twenty? that'd be fun, they catch every criminal but the big guy...they need to get his assistant sometime! that'd be fun!
kill linda! i don't like linda! michael should've slapped her. it doesn't seem fair that girls can slap guys for kissing them, but guys aren't allowed to. he shoulda slapped her! or manda coulda punched her. that woulda been fun.
anyhow, yeah, i liked it. good stuff. i don't know how you've finished two already...i'm thrilled to have finished one. yay for me! ^_^
we want manda 3! we want manda 3!
bwahaha, rodriguez is at it again! so how long till they finally catch him? three books? five? twenty? that'd be fun, they catch every criminal but the big guy...they need to get his assistant sometime! that'd be fun!
kill linda! i don't like linda! michael should've slapped her. it doesn't seem fair that girls can slap guys for kissing them, but guys aren't allowed to. he shoulda slapped her! or manda coulda punched her. that woulda been fun.
anyhow, yeah, i liked it. good stuff. i don't know how you've finished two already...i'm thrilled to have finished one. yay for me! ^_^
we want manda 3! we want manda 3!
3/13/2004 c18 lostinscotland
was that the same dude in kim's picture? way to tie in more and more evil happenings...heh. honestly have no idea how you do it, i get confused reading mysteries, let alone trying to write one
was that the same dude in kim's picture? way to tie in more and more evil happenings...heh. honestly have no idea how you do it, i get confused reading mysteries, let alone trying to write one
3/13/2004 c17 lostinscotland
i like michael! death take linda! even though i guess she's sorta useful...but i dun like her!
i like michael! death take linda! even though i guess she's sorta useful...but i dun like her!
3/13/2004 c15 lostinscotland
shot again! bwaha!
so what got shot this time? was it actually manda? i know you didn't kill her...less you took my suggestion for writing them out of order so she can actually die. but whatever. onwards!
shot again! bwaha!
so what got shot this time? was it actually manda? i know you didn't kill her...less you took my suggestion for writing them out of order so she can actually die. but whatever. onwards!
3/13/2004 c13 lostinscotland
::shakes head:: that poor kid's constantly getting beat up on, isn't she? she needs to be a ninja, or magical or something. make her life easier. ::nods sagely, then goes and reads more::
::shakes head:: that poor kid's constantly getting beat up on, isn't she? she needs to be a ninja, or magical or something. make her life easier. ::nods sagely, then goes and reads more::
3/13/2004 c12 lostinscotland
don't like damien either... ::ponder:: what are you plotting? or rather, what have you already plotted that i still have to go read?
i shall find out forthwith!
don't like damien either... ::ponder:: what are you plotting? or rather, what have you already plotted that i still have to go read?
i shall find out forthwith!