for Manda Rider 2 : Partners In Crime3/13/2004 c7 lostinscotland
bwahaha! guns!
^_^ i'm back! procastinating 'bout schoolwork, so i figured i'd read instead! much more fun. now, onwards!
bwahaha! guns!
^_^ i'm back! procastinating 'bout schoolwork, so i figured i'd read instead! much more fun. now, onwards!
1/28/2004 c5 lostinscotland
bwahaha, deck ace, that's right! stupid jerkface boys.
heh, anyway, intriguing, as always. i'll be back to read more later.
bwahaha, deck ace, that's right! stupid jerkface boys.
heh, anyway, intriguing, as always. i'll be back to read more later.
1/27/2004 c26 tzncz
Cool. that was good. Long, but good. Actually, the longer the better, lol. Keep writing!
Cool. that was good. Long, but good. Actually, the longer the better, lol. Keep writing!
1/27/2004 c22 tzncz
Story going well. So many characters! Well, so many baddies. Really hard to keep track of them all. The plot is really well planned out. Nice chapter. Keep writing!
Story going well. So many characters! Well, so many baddies. Really hard to keep track of them all. The plot is really well planned out. Nice chapter. Keep writing!
1/19/2004 c15 
4lostinshadow
I really like it so far! The story is really interesting. I'm glad you completed it. The one thing I don't like is having to wait for the next chapter of stories and not know what happens. :)
I can't finish reading the rest of it right now, but I will eventually.
btw, thanks for reviewing my story!
4lostinshadowI really like it so far! The story is really interesting. I'm glad you completed it. The one thing I don't like is having to wait for the next chapter of stories and not know what happens. :)
I can't finish reading the rest of it right now, but I will eventually.
btw, thanks for reviewing my story!
1/10/2004 c3 lostinscotland
argh! i don't have time to read this right now! but i started, and now i can't stop! darn you, making everything all intriguing and all... ::grumbles::
anyway, i'll come back and read this later. i can't believe you're finished it already! i'm so jealous...i'm still trying to finish one story.
anyhow, great work! i shall return!
argh! i don't have time to read this right now! but i started, and now i can't stop! darn you, making everything all intriguing and all... ::grumbles::
anyway, i'll come back and read this later. i can't believe you're finished it already! i'm so jealous...i'm still trying to finish one story.
anyhow, great work! i shall return!
1/6/2004 c26 7Lightness
oohh joy! you WILL be writing another one. that makes me very happy. cuz i was reading this last chapter and i was like, 'wait a minute... this is the last chapter and its not really ending.'
anyway.
this was hecka hecka good. i luv your characters, by the by. you keep adding all these little details about them and it makes them soo real.
great job. have fun. bye now.
7Lightnessoohh joy! you WILL be writing another one. that makes me very happy. cuz i was reading this last chapter and i was like, 'wait a minute... this is the last chapter and its not really ending.'
anyway.
this was hecka hecka good. i luv your characters, by the by. you keep adding all these little details about them and it makes them soo real.
great job. have fun. bye now.
1/6/2004 c23 Lightness
more twists. thats awesome. and by the by, ive come to the conclusion that linda is a schmog.
more twists. thats awesome. and by the by, ive come to the conclusion that linda is a schmog.
1/6/2004 c19 Lightness
im actually surprised that the michael kid would be willing to go out to that restaurant after knowing about those threats and that whole poison and such. was that why manda was a bit uncomfortable? or was it just becuz it was linda he was going with?
guess ill keep reading then. ^_^.
im actually surprised that the michael kid would be willing to go out to that restaurant after knowing about those threats and that whole poison and such. was that why manda was a bit uncomfortable? or was it just becuz it was linda he was going with?
guess ill keep reading then. ^_^.
1/5/2004 c17 Lightness
good god. this story is soo good. keeps the reader on their toes so they keep reading and reading... but i really need to stop for now. theres that whole sleeping thing i need to get to.
anyway. that linda girl is horridably bothersome. more bothersome than before.
but all those little michael/manda moments are really cute and aw-ing.
its fun stuff.
okay, buh byee. ill come back later.
good god. this story is soo good. keeps the reader on their toes so they keep reading and reading... but i really need to stop for now. theres that whole sleeping thing i need to get to.
anyway. that linda girl is horridably bothersome. more bothersome than before.
but all those little michael/manda moments are really cute and aw-ing.
its fun stuff.
okay, buh byee. ill come back later.
1/4/2004 c6 Lightness
just thought of something: they found the paper under the body. i dunno. it seemed a little odd for it to be found *under* it like that.
aah well. tiny thing. doesnt matter. moving on.
just thought of something: they found the paper under the body. i dunno. it seemed a little odd for it to be found *under* it like that.
aah well. tiny thing. doesnt matter. moving on.
1/4/2004 c5 Lightness
'Well, I find it...unique...and...uh, full of character...in...in an opposite sort of way.' - i loved that line.
and that little punching scene was great. ^_^.
'Well, I find it...unique...and...uh, full of character...in...in an opposite sort of way.' - i loved that line.
and that little punching scene was great. ^_^.