for Manda Rider 2 : Partners In Crime1/4/2004 c4 
7Lightness
that linda girl is very eiirky. and whats the deal with michael? what could he possible have done? kay reading on.
7Lightnessthat linda girl is very eiirky. and whats the deal with michael? what could he possible have done? kay reading on.
1/4/2004 c1 Lightness
heeya. ive finally gotten to your second story. arent you proud? (sure ya are).
anyway.
whoaa. crazy things are already happening. falling unconscious because of too much food isnt really normal. poor amy.
heeya. ive finally gotten to your second story. arent you proud? (sure ya are).
anyway.
whoaa. crazy things are already happening. falling unconscious because of too much food isnt really normal. poor amy.
12/16/2003 c26 2sahnetorte
Great ending! My guess the next story they'll finally meet Rodriguez, right? Take your time with the story. I'm sure I'll be reading the next one.
2sahnetorteGreat ending! My guess the next story they'll finally meet Rodriguez, right? Take your time with the story. I'm sure I'll be reading the next one.
12/13/2003 c26 Here In My Mind
WOW! Awsome ending. I never would've guessed tat it was Kim. (Some detective I am -_-) Poor Michael! He was so brave tking that bullet for Manda. *sigh*
I can't wait until your next Manda Rider story. Take all the time you need. I understand how hectic life can be. Just etting over this really bad virus or whatever it is.
See ya next time ^._
WOW! Awsome ending. I never would've guessed tat it was Kim. (Some detective I am -_-) Poor Michael! He was so brave tking that bullet for Manda. *sigh*
I can't wait until your next Manda Rider story. Take all the time you need. I understand how hectic life can be. Just etting over this really bad virus or whatever it is.
See ya next time ^._
12/4/2003 c22 sahnetorte
I see a foreshadowing on Rodriguez. Sounds ominous. And Michael, What will happen to him. Is Kim Bowman one of the 'bad guys'? Interesting chapter.
I see a foreshadowing on Rodriguez. Sounds ominous. And Michael, What will happen to him. Is Kim Bowman one of the 'bad guys'? Interesting chapter.
12/4/2003 c21 sahnetorte
Great chapter! Michael's reaction to Manda's daredevil stunts was perfect. Their opposite personalities fits one another very well. It's no wonder they worked great together.
Great chapter! Michael's reaction to Manda's daredevil stunts was perfect. Their opposite personalities fits one another very well. It's no wonder they worked great together.
12/4/2003 c20 sahnetorte
Interesting. I wonder what the key is for. And Sondra's background seems suspicious..
Interesting. I wonder what the key is for. And Sondra's background seems suspicious..
12/3/2003 c22 Here In My Mind
Those were great chapters! I hope Manda decides not to work with Linda. I can't stand that girl!
So the mysterious Damien decided to make a brief appearance. I hope he's not a bad guy. What did he mean by finding Manda a "special position" if she joined Envirolnc? ~.~
What do illegal aliens have to do with this? What were James and Bowman's connection? Is Rodriguez involved somehow? Will Michael be alright? *sob*
Till the next chappie ^_~
Those were great chapters! I hope Manda decides not to work with Linda. I can't stand that girl!
So the mysterious Damien decided to make a brief appearance. I hope he's not a bad guy. What did he mean by finding Manda a "special position" if she joined Envirolnc? ~.~
What do illegal aliens have to do with this? What were James and Bowman's connection? Is Rodriguez involved somehow? Will Michael be alright? *sob*
Till the next chappie ^_~
11/30/2003 c18 sahnetorte
Aha, we're getting somewhere. What was it about Kane that Manda was thinking about? He's dead..right? Very intriguing, as Michael had said. ;)
Aha, we're getting somewhere. What was it about Kane that Manda was thinking about? He's dead..right? Very intriguing, as Michael had said. ;)
11/23/2003 c17 sahnetorte
I find Linda an interesting character in annoying sort of way that you can't help but love to hate her. I guess that's what you're hoping for, hm? :)
Great update. More soon 'k?
I find Linda an interesting character in annoying sort of way that you can't help but love to hate her. I guess that's what you're hoping for, hm? :)
Great update. More soon 'k?
11/22/2003 c17 tzncz
I don't really like Linda... Sorry. That was pretty random.
Anyway, nice chapter. Long, too :) Keep writing!
I don't really like Linda... Sorry. That was pretty random.
Anyway, nice chapter. Long, too :) Keep writing!
11/22/2003 c17 Here In My Mind
*sigh* Michael is such a sweetie. Wish I had a guy like that.
Poor Manda. They invaded her personal things. And exactly what was she wearing? ^.^
I still can't stand Linda though. So will Manda decide to work with her? Is Linda hiding something? What happened in Michael's past? Who were those "FBI" agents? Is Manda still in danger?
Till the next chappie. ^.~
*sigh* Michael is such a sweetie. Wish I had a guy like that.
Poor Manda. They invaded her personal things. And exactly what was she wearing? ^.^
I still can't stand Linda though. So will Manda decide to work with her? Is Linda hiding something? What happened in Michael's past? Who were those "FBI" agents? Is Manda still in danger?
Till the next chappie. ^.~
11/18/2003 c16 sahnetorte
Phew! That was kind of tense. You really had me thinking Manda didn't make it but i'm glad she did. great job.
Phew! That was kind of tense. You really had me thinking Manda didn't make it but i'm glad she did. great job.