11/17/2003 c16 Here In My Mind
Yeah Manda got away! ^.^ I knew there was something suspicious abot those two "FBI" agents. Can't fool me! ^o^
So now what will Manda do? Will Michael be able to find her? Is Linda an ally or foe? When will we see the hansome Damien again? *drool -.-*
Till the next chappie ^_~
Yeah Manda got away! ^.^ I knew there was something suspicious abot those two "FBI" agents. Can't fool me! ^o^
So now what will Manda do? Will Michael be able to find her? Is Linda an ally or foe? When will we see the hansome Damien again? *drool -.-*
Till the next chappie ^_~
11/17/2003 c16 13Faded Soulfire
Wow, I thought Manda was a goner. I guess not, well not yet anyway. Gosh, I'm really getting into this story now and you need to update! Very soon. Thanks.
Faded Soulfire
Wow, I thought Manda was a goner. I guess not, well not yet anyway. Gosh, I'm really getting into this story now and you need to update! Very soon. Thanks.
Faded Soulfire
11/17/2003 c15 tzncz
Everything seems to happen to Manda. Sorry, I would've reviewed some more somewhere in between, like chap 10 or something, but I JUST HAD TO KEEP READING! Keep writing!
Everything seems to happen to Manda. Sorry, I would've reviewed some more somewhere in between, like chap 10 or something, but I JUST HAD TO KEEP READING! Keep writing!
11/13/2003 c6 tzncz
So many names to remember! Sorry. I have a bad memory. But the story is really good. Keep writing!
So many names to remember! Sorry. I have a bad memory. But the story is really good. Keep writing!
11/13/2003 c14 Faded Soulfire
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I love this story so much and it's absolutely a fantastic chapter. So, I have my theories and ideas of who murdered... um, what's his name. Sorry! I'm horrible with names... but I don't want to reveal the theory until I feel confident that there is a chance it's correct. Will u update soon, please?
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I love this story so much and it's absolutely a fantastic chapter. So, I have my theories and ideas of who murdered... um, what's his name. Sorry! I'm horrible with names... but I don't want to reveal the theory until I feel confident that there is a chance it's correct. Will u update soon, please?
11/12/2003 c13 Here In My Mind
Oh I forgot to mention that I changed my pen name. I use to be Liyah-chan () but I am now Lttl-chan. ^_^ Okies, that's all I wanted to say and oh yeah,
I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY!
*gets dragged away by her friends*
Oh I forgot to mention that I changed my pen name. I use to be Liyah-chan () but I am now Lttl-chan. ^_^ Okies, that's all I wanted to say and oh yeah,
I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE YOUR STORY!
*gets dragged away by her friends*
11/12/2003 c14 Here In My Mind
I love how this sequel is turning out. Manda is still my favorite character. She's so cool and independant. Not to mention stubborn. ^_^ But that Linda bimbo. I can't stand that wench! T_T I hope she dies or something. (Like getting hit by a bus, struck by lightning, or beaten up by old ladies for starters. Lol. ^.^)
And who is this charming young man namned Damien? ^_^ Is he intrested in our Manda? Could Michael be jealous? And who killed James? Was it one person or perhaps more? Is there some type of conspiracy? Will Linda ever die? Lol. Ok that's it for now.
Till the next chappie ^_~
I love how this sequel is turning out. Manda is still my favorite character. She's so cool and independant. Not to mention stubborn. ^_^ But that Linda bimbo. I can't stand that wench! T_T I hope she dies or something. (Like getting hit by a bus, struck by lightning, or beaten up by old ladies for starters. Lol. ^.^)
And who is this charming young man namned Damien? ^_^ Is he intrested in our Manda? Could Michael be jealous? And who killed James? Was it one person or perhaps more? Is there some type of conspiracy? Will Linda ever die? Lol. Ok that's it for now.
Till the next chappie ^_~
11/10/2003 c14 2sahnetorte
Hey, great to see you've posted the second story! I've read it in one sitting. Interesting storyline. I can just see the conflict for Manda. I get the feeling Linda is using Manda for her own importance. what's she up to?
Hey, great to see you've posted the second story! I've read it in one sitting. Interesting storyline. I can just see the conflict for Manda. I get the feeling Linda is using Manda for her own importance. what's she up to?
11/5/2003 c5 Faded Soulfire
Whoa... great story here. Sorry I'm not reviewing a lot... I'm just trying to read since there is so much here. :)
Whoa... great story here. Sorry I'm not reviewing a lot... I'm just trying to read since there is so much here. :)
11/5/2003 c1 Faded Soulfire
Hey girl! For awhile I thought you weren't going to write the sequel. *squeals* Now I have so much to read and I have to hold on, on reading this so I can get my other stuff done first. If I have time, I'll come back and read some more. Until then.
Faded Soulfire
Hey girl! For awhile I thought you weren't going to write the sequel. *squeals* Now I have so much to read and I have to hold on, on reading this so I can get my other stuff done first. If I have time, I'll come back and read some more. Until then.
Faded Soulfire