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for The Shortened Life of George Hendrix

3/6/2005 c1 1Shuyan
Great story. Very detailed and well thought out. Great job! If you have a chance can you check out my story Shade of darkness
2/27/2005 c1 22GjK
Hmm...Interesting. I must say that. Interesting and creative.
12/28/2004 c1 Angelfish
Wow! Unlike anything I've ever read. I can't think of anything negative to point out.
6/15/2004 c1 80Visions of Harmony
why oh why do you have to be so good at this? grr!
I can't believe you were in 7th Grade when you wrote this...*sigh*... Oh, this is SO unfair. I just randomly stumbled on this, it was on author highlights, and I thought..." hmm... haven't read this one" So, obviously, I DID! YAY ME! heh heh!
Good moral behind the story. In the middle I got a bit confused, but I have re-read it and I understand it all now. T'is good! Strange, like, how dreams are sometimes ominous messages. Like my Dad's friend was in the army, and he was sent away. One night my Dad had a dream that he came back, that he came to his house and stuff. The next day, Dad got a letter saying his friend had died in action. That is scary, but true. So, urm...yeh, what else to say? This is an excellent piece! *jealous glance*
love and huggles xoxoxo
5/5/2004 c1 7Sterces
Interesting... Weird but oh-so-lovely! Hehehe I got a kick out it! Nice!
4/5/2004 c1 79vturnip
What an interesting piece. I like it and enjoyed the religious and moral nuances of the work. I swear if you wrote this in the 7th grade I will turn lime green.
12/4/2003 c1 14Trapped-Bird
12/1/2003 c1 8htmraw
Hey! That was pretty good... So the dreams were only a trick? Wow most dreams like that I know come true except people reject them... Sorry I got sidetracked yeah good story.
11/14/2003 c1 Leigh Nithra
you're we-ird
11/14/2003 c1 8Infinity04
mixed feelings! can't describe, his thoughts were sick and twisted... mad eme sick! lol!
11/3/2003 c1 1Hidden Self
bizarre, dude. utterly bizarre. i lyke it!

~*Hidden Self*~
10/28/2003 c1 1Tortellini
Nice story. I didn't expect you to put in God/Satan dialogue.

You handed this in to your 7th grade teacher? I thought mine was surprised when I handed in a 230page (but light and G rated) i'd have loved to see his/her face.
10/26/2003 c1 41Razor Sharp Kisses
Wow. I have such...mixed emotions about this story. I don't know what to say or how to describe my feelings. It's very well written. I like it a lot.
10/26/2003 c1 12IHJ
Yes, it's a bit bizarre and confusing here and there (I didn't know he was about to die) and the humor doesn't really shine through as "The Ring" but there were funny moments. (Like when he was reminded his son was alive by God.) A few typos here and there, "trial" not "trail", but overall a slightly bizarre story we can learn something from. Nice ending and explanation of the first dream! Great symbolism. :)

-Izzy J.

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