
6/27/2004 c4
150SpawnMeister666
I'll be better able to review this chapter when I stop giggling like a loon.
Or when I sober up a little and I have a little more blood in my alcohol stream.
Whichever happens first I guess!
Spawny

I'll be better able to review this chapter when I stop giggling like a loon.
Or when I sober up a little and I have a little more blood in my alcohol stream.
Whichever happens first I guess!
Spawny
6/23/2004 c3
1Valdez
Well...that made absolutely no sense at all to me.It could be funny but half the time I can't figure out why they're talking or what the hell about.Sorry I didn't like it at all.

Well...that made absolutely no sense at all to me.It could be funny but half the time I can't figure out why they're talking or what the hell about.Sorry I didn't like it at all.
6/20/2004 c3
150SpawnMeister666
As always, total and utter nonsense.
It takes a special talent to write nonsense so well, and for that I applaud you and salute you.
Spawny

As always, total and utter nonsense.
It takes a special talent to write nonsense so well, and for that I applaud you and salute you.
Spawny
3/21/2004 c2 SpawnMeister666
As wonderfully mad as ever! The great thing about this is it makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, and it doesn't matter. It got me grinning anyway, and surely thats all thats important!
Spawny
As wonderfully mad as ever! The great thing about this is it makes absolutely no sense whatsoever, and it doesn't matter. It got me grinning anyway, and surely thats all thats important!
Spawny
11/2/2003 c1
1Oort
Yay! You did a sequel! This is better than the 'short&stupid', no offense. Update!

Yay! You did a sequel! This is better than the 'short&stupid', no offense. Update!
11/1/2003 c1
10Mobius Soul
I reviewed your other stuff, I would like to be in this, I am male just to let you know...PLEASE UPDATE THIS INSANITY, IT'S SOME OF THE FUNNIEST INSANITY I HAVE EVER READ! And I've read Douglas Adams, so that's saying something...

I reviewed your other stuff, I would like to be in this, I am male just to let you know...PLEASE UPDATE THIS INSANITY, IT'S SOME OF THE FUNNIEST INSANITY I HAVE EVER READ! And I've read Douglas Adams, so that's saying something...
10/29/2003 c1
150SpawnMeister666
Cool...your writers block is over at last and your back to writing total nonsense!
I knew there was a reason I liked your work!
Nonsense is good. Anyone can write sensible stories, even me, well, sometimes even me!
Nonsense is the future of literature though, I´m totally convinced!
Spawny

Cool...your writers block is over at last and your back to writing total nonsense!
I knew there was a reason I liked your work!
Nonsense is good. Anyone can write sensible stories, even me, well, sometimes even me!
Nonsense is the future of literature though, I´m totally convinced!
Spawny
10/26/2003 c1 Psychotic Cheeto
It has an interesting plot, though I suggest you slow it down quite a bit and explain what is going on. It sounds a bit strange when a book jumps into that different of a plot that fast. Try slowing it down a bit with some descriptions. It will make the chapters longer also.
Good Luck!
It has an interesting plot, though I suggest you slow it down quite a bit and explain what is going on. It sounds a bit strange when a book jumps into that different of a plot that fast. Try slowing it down a bit with some descriptions. It will make the chapters longer also.
Good Luck!