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12/10/2003 c1 25White-Mage-Of-Death
Dude. That. Rocks. Especially liked " Never. Piss. Me. Off."
10/26/2003 c1 N. Amsden
Possibly an interesting story concept, but not presented very well...

I realize that this is a short story and that that leaves less room to draw out a plot complication and develop it more fully... However, even for a short story, this is too rushed, especially the ending.

Treat this story as the "outline" for something longer and more detailed, and see what you can come up with.

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