for Assorted Haiku5/20/2006 c1 
6feelingshortofstable
That moment, which upon first speculation is driven by doubt and fear, is so well captured here. It's amazing how that was managed in just twelve words. Anyway, it really hit home for me. Great job. :)
6feelingshortofstableThat moment, which upon first speculation is driven by doubt and fear, is so well captured here. It's amazing how that was managed in just twelve words. Anyway, it really hit home for me. Great job. :)
1/20/2005 c3 18Aged Parent Peggotty Barkis
I liked the first two better because they wrote of nicer things and really seemed to encapsulate the moment.
There is nothign wrong with the idea in the third one but I think the last line seems a little jolted... perhaps you could write a word other than hence... like... as...ok now I understand how hard it is!
18Aged Parent Peggotty BarkisI liked the first two better because they wrote of nicer things and really seemed to encapsulate the moment.
There is nothign wrong with the idea in the third one but I think the last line seems a little jolted... perhaps you could write a word other than hence... like... as...ok now I understand how hard it is!
12/7/2004 c1 5M.P. Solo
I sense a lieBefore you even say itYour eyes betray you
I've never given much thought to haikus, but I don't disregard them. They're not all that easy to do seriously, and anyone who can put together a good one deserves to be commended.
So, I commend you. Very well done, as always.
5M.P. SoloI sense a lieBefore you even say itYour eyes betray you
I've never given much thought to haikus, but I don't disregard them. They're not all that easy to do seriously, and anyone who can put together a good one deserves to be commended.
So, I commend you. Very well done, as always.
3/25/2004 c3 35Vestigial Account
I liked the last one best. The sardony (is that a word?) was great. The first one was also very good, thought-provoking and imaginative. The second had wonderful imagery. It must be hard to squeeze all that meaning into such a few words. You've done it beautifully.
35Vestigial AccountI liked the last one best. The sardony (is that a word?) was great. The first one was also very good, thought-provoking and imaginative. The second had wonderful imagery. It must be hard to squeeze all that meaning into such a few words. You've done it beautifully.
12/27/2003 c2 Werecat99
That was a beautiful and original picture. I don't think I've read anything similar before.
That was a beautiful and original picture. I don't think I've read anything similar before.